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Well, I love writing this story. I hope you like reading it as well. This story started with a title. When I had thought of the title, I thought this will be a short story which will finish in 4 parts. I didn't even have a plot at that time. All, I knew was that it was sad story.
Then I wrote the first chapter. Now we are at the sixth. This is a short story and will always be one. However, it was this one story that I had wrote spontaneously, which I will always remember. Right - now we are off to chapter 6. Readers if you spot any mistakes, please email me or PM me. I have proof read it. However, a writer can miss things out. I am not a genius.
Love,
Mishty
Chapter 6
Khushi saw the door close. Her mind was at rest now. At least, Arnav
would get some rest now. An hour later, she heard a knock on the door. She
called the person in. The person was accompanied by the Police Officer.
“Hi, I am Aisha, I work for ETF. I am the sketching artist. I was sent here to make some sketches of the killers,” said
Aisha. Khushi remembered Rathod mentioning Sketches.
“Oh yes, please come in!” said Khushi politely. The Police officer
then soon left them. Khushi explained to Aisha what the six men looked like
vaguely. However all the information was still enough to make decent sketches.
It took them 2 hours, to make the correct sketches.
“Okay, Khushi. I will pass them on to the team! Thank you for your
co-operation!” said Aisha kindly and soon left. Khushi then lied back down and
sighed in relief. She was thankful how everyone was supporting her. Strangers
who she didn't know.
Maybe sometimes Strangers are more trustworthy then the ones who
know.
Arnav was at home. He had just finished his shower, and some food.
He stretched his hands in the air.
She was right. He was tired.
A shower was just what he needed. Now he was sitting reading the
newspaper.
At the back of his mind, he still thought that it was not safe to
leave Khushi alone in the hospital. Her life was still in danger. His heart was telling him to go back. He
knew that there was a police officer but still.
No, she would probably be fine, he thought. He began reading the
newspaper again, when her face flashed in front of him again. He could feel her
calling out to him again and again. Like she was when he first saved her. He
sighed. He knew that he couldn’t concentrate now, so he left with the car keys,
and drove to the hospital. He tried to convince his mind that nothing would
have happened, and that she was still safe. She was probably still sleeping,
like he had left her.
Thousands of thoughts whizzed through his mind in a second. As the
thoughts came, the speed of his car increased, trying to reach there as soon as
possible. He quickly parked his car and strode through the hospital, running
through the corridors.
He was there at last. He noticed that the police officer was not
outside. He turned the knob and the sight that greeted him, sent him into
shock. A tall masked man was standing with an injection in his hand, with
Khushi’s wrist in the other hand. He saw Khushi’s eyes closed, her body
trembling from fear. He was about to plunge the injection in her wrist when
Arnav strode through, pulling him away. He took the injection out of his hand,
and threw it in one corner of the room. The man looked shocked upon his
arrival.
Khushi saw Arnav stride in. She was too much in shock to realise
anything. She just closed her eyes and prayed that nothing happened. It felt
like a dream. One minute she was sleeping, and one minute, there was someone,
trying to kill her. After Aisha had left, she wanted to catch up
on her sleep. She was feeling okay, but she still felt weak.
However, after speaking to Arnav, her stranger and the ETF team, she
found some peace in her heart. There were still some good people out there, who
still cared about others. She felt stronger, like she could handle this. She
was still grieving about her husband, but she knew that she must move on. It
was the only way to lessen the pain.
But she still was adamant on one issue. Rohan will get justice.
She would make sure of that.
So she lay down, and turned on the side, so that she was facing away
from the door. A second later, she thought she heard something, but just took
it to be her imagination. Soon, she felt a hard grip on her neck. She was
being turned around. The grip was strong enough to strangle her. She saw the
masked man. She squirmed trying to get away from him. She looked into his eyes.
As soon as she looked into his eyes, she saw regret there. She felt
that he didn't want to do this, but was being forced. However those thoughts
flew out of her mind, when she saw that he had pulled out the injection. He trapped her small wrists in his large hand, and he was about to plunge the injection, when
he was flung away from her. Her eyes opened in shock, and she saw her angel,
saving her once more. She now sat up and watched the happenings with silence.
He held the man’s collar and punched him across his jaw; his jaw had
started bleeding due to the pressure of his punch. The man was flung across the
room, hitting the cabinets in the room. Arnav then kicked him across the
stomach, and stepped on his hand really hard. Then he slapped him across his
cheek. The man was screaming in agony. Soon he fainted due to the pain but
Arnav was still punching him. The hospital room door burst open, and the police
officer strode in feeling shocked. He ran to Arnav and pulled him off the
masked man.
“Leave him, he will die!” exclaimed the Police officer. It was the
wrong move. Arnav’s anger still had not vanished. He stood up and held the
collar of the Police man’s uniform.
“Where were you, when all this happened?” asked Arnav.
“Did he pay you as well, so you could disappear while he killed her?
Where were you? YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BE PROTECTING HER DAMMIT!” shouted Arnav.
“I am sorry Sir! I went on a bathroom break!” squeaked the Police Officer.
“I didn't know this was going to happen!” said the Police Officer. Arnav
left him, disgusted at his carelessness. He immediately sent a text to Arjun,
informing him that he should come to the hospital a.s.a.p. The police officer scrambled outside, guarding the door.
Khushi saw him punch the man. She felt gratitude towards Arnav, but she
also wanted to stop him. She felt very weak and suddenly she felt herself
falling.
His eyes went to Khushi, when he saw her lose consciousness. He
immediately ran and engulfed her in a hug. He felt her squirming. He moved back
slightly to see that her cheeks were pale. She opened her eyes. He rubbed them, when he saw color once again returning, he stopped. He rubbed her back, in circular motions.
He knew what just happened was a lot for her to take in. In two
days, she just got attacked twice. She has gone through a lot. He hugged her
once again. Their heartbeats were slowly merging into one. Arnav realized the
impact his actions would have caused, if had not come in time. If he hadn't listened to his heart, the woman sitting in front of him with her hands on his
chest, would have been dead.
He tried not to think about all of this, but her scared face, kept
coming in front of his eyes. He found Khushi looking up at him. He took her hand
in his and locked his gaze with hers.
Thats why it is said to follow ur instincts sometimes if its for about the person you care...even after being half-strangers to each other they care & support each other alot...
ReplyDeleteLoved the update!!
Very well said. One should always follow their gut instincts because 99% of the time, gut instincts are the right ones.
DeleteWell glad you liked the update.
Love,
Mishty
glad that arnav came on timee
ReplyDeleteand that he listened to his heart
hope we will find out about the man soon
Oh that will be revealed all in the next chapter. But first answer the poll on the left please. Just want to know what my readers are thinking.
DeleteLove,
Mishty
Wow very touching update ... Extremely well written
ReplyDeleteThank you! Glad that you liked it.
DeleteLove,
Mishty
Awesome
ReplyDeleteAmazing
Super hit update
Thank god Arnav came on time
Love this story very interesting
Can't wait to read some romantic moments between Arnav and khushi I know it's very soon to ask u to write romantic moments but what to do I'm can't wait hahahha so please write some in up coming parts ;) continue soon please
Yes. I am glad too that he came on time. In reality this doesn't happen, however this is my fiction so even stars can fall out the sky.
DeleteBut I will try to make it as real as possible. I know romantic moments, well I didn't plan for any. This was more of an investigation fiction. So a lot of facts and mystery, and more of a thriller. So cannot promise any lovey-dovey moments in this one. However, I will make up for it in the other one.
Love,
Mishty
Amazingly written..This is getting very interesting update by update..Agree with Lincy always follow your instincts regarding loved ones..
ReplyDeleteYes, I agree with Lincy too. Glad you liked the update.
DeleteLove,
Mishty
Superb update best writer yar bt plz its a humble request plz update lOng parts of marked' wildet rose and forbiden fire dese are too short i hope u cn do dat
ReplyDeleteI am sorry this is the longest I can go, only because I do not have the time to write. Also i am the writer of the "The Wilted Rose" but not "Marked" or "Forbidden Fire." Those are written by my friend, Anshra.
DeleteHer website: http://arshdarkflame.blogspot.co.uk/p/home.html
Ohh im realy sorry i hvnt realized abt dat and its ok
DeleteOh no, it's fine. I just wanted to let you know! :)
DeleteLove,
Mishty
Awesome udpate. Arnav's gut instincts came through. Please update soon. Thanks, AK
ReplyDeleteThank you! Glad you liked it.
DeleteLove,
Mishty
hey amazing update love
ReplyDeletesooo happy he listened to his gut instinct and save her
cant wait to see some romantic moment between them
looking forward to the next update
update soon
Glad arnav listened to his heart and not his brain
ReplyDeletelovely update
cnt wait to read what happeneds next x
Who the this man trying to kill khusi
ReplyDeletereally loved the update. please update soon.
ReplyDeleteloved the update really
ReplyDeletethank god arnav was there so save her
wonderful
ReplyDeleteAwesome update glad he went with his instincts and came to check on her poor khushi twice she almost died asr is her guardian angel loved the update
ReplyDeleteOh my she was attacked even with the police protection. Glad Arnav was able to save her!
ReplyDeleteSimply amazing, I'm so glad Arnav came in time to save her! This was a really sweet update because he's like her guardian angel! Btw are you continuing Cooerced Alliances anytime soon? Keep up the amazing work!
ReplyDelete-CB
Whats happening and why ??? Please suspense kholo abhi !!
ReplyDeleteAnother brilliant update
ReplyDeleteWho wanted to kill Khushi? and Why?
Its getting interesting day by day
Loved d update
Pls continue soon
wow another attempt to kill her...i wonder hwy they are after her :/ but cant wait to read more of it and figure it out :]
ReplyDeletelove it u r best
ReplyDeletegetting intrested.....
ReplyDeleteBrilliant update!!! Loved it...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful udpate, readd all 6 chapters. Nice plot , great story
ReplyDeletenice updtae thank god arnav came at correct time!!!!when wil v get to knw abt arshi more???who was that man???khushi's husband bro???
ReplyDeletekushigowda
read all the 6 parts in one go, though i had read before part 1 and 2, but read it today again from the beginning. loved it. please cont soon (IF User id laksh65)
ReplyDeletePhew... Thank god I read all the last few chapters together else I would not have been able to breathe thru the cliffhanger. Ugh...
ReplyDeleteThis story is getting gripping.. I love mystery thrillers and since u have characters I know it's even more interesting.
Arnav n khushi's chemistry in this one is really different. One of solace n comfort, one of instincts and whispers. It's brilliant. Yes.. Sometimes strangers r the ones to help.
So the culprit know that khushi is alive n in the hospital. Could it b her family or did the news just leak out? Gosh.. My mind is reeling with possibilities..
It was a mere escape for Khushi. Lucky that Arnav listened to his heart & arrived on time. I love the way he hugged her & how his gaze got locked with hers. Cant wait for the next update to know the man behind the mask.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant update!!! Loved it...
ReplyDeletesummaiyasayed
awesome update dr
ReplyDeletethanks god that arnav has come on time to save her
love the way how he had hug her
now more curious to know who is that mask man
am sure its some related to khushi or rohan
love the update dr
amazing.
ReplyDeleteMISTIE,IF
Amazing update mishty dii
ReplyDeleteI was silent reader till now but I have to comment on this story
U r a brilliant writer
Your all stories are awesome
Wow gut feeling saved khushi's life
I think masked man is rohan's brother
I think arnav will take khushi to shantivan
Please update soon dii :)
awesome update....
ReplyDeletethanks god arnav came on time..
she is fine nw...
want to know who wants to kill khushi n why???
waiting for eagerly waiting for next part.. pls..
thanks for mail dear..
DAMNNN! I wonder if the artist was somehow related to the attacker
ReplyDelete& Phew Arnav listened to his heart and saved Khushi :d
amazing arnav
ReplyDeletejust came on time
plzzzz update next part soon
hi thanks 4 da superb update! Well written! Khwaishfan (IF)
ReplyDeletethe killer is still after Khushi
ReplyDeleteAmazing update. Glad that arnav reached there on time. Again suspense, regret in murderer's eye.
ReplyDeleteSo arhi heartbeat s merging. Waiting 4 the witled rose to be romantic one
part 6
ReplyDeletenice part..........
who are these people?
poor Khushi...........
cont soon dear...............
Deepa (spvd)
why r people bhind hr life??thank god arnav reached in time.....
ReplyDeleteushankitvc
wow!!!! amazing...read chapters 4, 5,6..beautifully written..loved it
ReplyDeletewow amazing update
ReplyDeleteOMG!!!! :O
ReplyDeleteGoing to next!
awesome
ReplyDeletemissmk if
Thank god arnav came on time
ReplyDeletewho is this man??
intense
ReplyDeletegreat update pleased arnav got there ontime
ReplyDeletegreat update dear:)
ReplyDeletemandy15
happy that Arnav was there to save Khushi.. good one..
ReplyDeleteAwesome update. It's really strange how our instincts work sometimes alerting us. Even though they r strangers they developed a bond between them.
ReplyDeleteyay he saved her again
ReplyDeleteoh yeah he saved her.
ReplyDeletethe mental trauma khushi would face due to all this :(, poor girl.