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Okay...So I am on a roll here with my updates but what to do...! I guess I really want to finish this FF as soon as possible! So I can write others!
Well I hope you like it!
Love,
Mishty
Chapter 16
The next morning they woke up early and tried to get out of the room as quickly as possible. Today they were going to visit the city of Rome, with it fountains and the beautiful Colosseum. Arnav had arranged a car for them which would take them around the city of Rome but as most of it had to be seen on foot, they parked the car somewhere and started to walk. It was quite chilly weather and so they were both wrapped up nice and warm.
They began walking and reached the
famous Colosseum. The architecture was just beautiful from the outside and it
just looked magnificent. They both entered to see the beautiful ruins of the
Colosseum and the inside was just beautiful. They roamed around.
The architecture is so beautiful
gasped Khushi.
Hmm....it is a theater, one of the
largest in the world, it could seat about 500,000 spectators. Explained Arnav.
Wow....it looks so big from the
inside.
I never knew that you were so fond of
the architecture.
I am but I never got a chance to
pursue it as a career, I was fortunate that my family let me carry on studying
something, and I didn't argue on that fact, and they only made a deal that I pursue business and how it works, so I didn't say much.
Ohh...do you still want to do
architecture?
I would love to but I don’t have a
choice do I? I mean I am in my last year...of doing my masters, then it would
be a waste of time, going back to architecture again.
Why did your family want you to do
business rather than architecture?
They felt that I wouldn’t be able to grasp
architecture because I am a woman and that business would be much better, plus
they thought that after marriage I wouldn’t work so they let me study further
until I suddenly got a call that I was to come straight to Lucknow and then I
think you know the rest.
Your family seems really
conservative.
Tell me about it...most of the women
in my family are really scared of their husbands, I mean if dad even hold
mama’s hand then she gets scared.
Didn't you even try to convince them a
little?
I would have but what was the point...they
would have probably slapped me and locked me in a room and then told me that I couldn’t study at all....so studying business was the better option.
Hmm.
They left the Colosseum
and grabbed some quick lunch. Suddenly Khushi saw a balloon seller with
different types of balloons.
Look...they’re so colorful Khushi said purely out of excitement. Arnav turned around to look at
what she was staring at.
She’s a complete child
woman! He thought.
Khushi...come on lets go.
Nahi....I want to
buy a balloon.
What?
Yes....I want to
buy a balloon! Let’s go...
Khushi...stop being
demanding and lets go.
No....she said. They she
happily walked off to the balloon seller and bought a bunch of colorful balloons. She then came back and told Arnav to hold on to them.
Please can you hold
them for a bit, she said and gave them to him, without even letting him reply
back. She then opened her handbag and got out a piece of paper and a pen. She
then began writing, “May God protect our family from all the evils in this
world! Love Arnav and Khushi.” She then rolled the piece of paper and tied it
to the balloon strings. Then she let them go into the air, like a an excited
girl.
Arnav just stared at her
in amusement. He didn't know that Khushi was so enthusiastic about such things
and lives life in such a happy manner. He started feeling a little guilty of the
way he thought she was a gold digger but it’s the complete opposite. She was
the shining light that could turn anyone’s world upside down. She knew how to
live life in a happy way. Her innocence was maybe the best thing about her but
the unfortunate thing was that this world was full of evilness which left
people in vulnerable situations.
They then went to visit
St. Peter’s cathedral as it displayed more architecture, something that both of
them had in common for once.
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It was soon night time and
they were returning to the hotel. They were walking when they passed a
fountain.
Arnav...lets go
there...thats so beautiful.
They both saw a crowd,
gathered at the fountain, and Arnav seeing that didn't want to go anywhere near
it.
Khushi...look it’s too
much crowded....
Oh don’t be a
spoiled sport please! Look there are so many people there! Saying that she
pulls him with her.
Look...these are the Trevi
Fountains. I have read about them before. If you throw a coin and wish
something, the wish definitely comes true.
She then got a few coins out from her bag and gave one to Arnav. She turns away from the fountain, closes her eyes and chucks the coin into the fountain, standing backwards. She then wishes something. Arnav stares at her angelic face, looking so serene in the moon light. Arnav followed the same thing but when he closed his eyes, all he could see was her angelic face.
He then did the same thing as her and quickly wished for something.
Although he didn't believe
all this but at that moment, it felt like something special that he should do
and that's why he went with the whole idea. He opened his eyes to see her
staring at her.
It was fun right? Asked
Khushi.
Hmm...he answered in
monosyllables.
Thanks for bringing me
here...it so wonderful! I have never been outside of India anywhere...now all
this seems wonderful...thanks..
You should be thanking
Nani...it was her idea in the first place, he said thoughtfully.
Hmm...Arnav I know that we
hated each other in the first instance and that we thought that we would make
each other’s life miserable but unknowingly, you have actually done a lot of
things for me that no-one has done before. I also know that we are husband and
wife but we do not share that type of relation yet. Plus it becomes hard for me to
call you something when I think about what type of relationship we share... So
Friends? She threw her hand out for a hand shake.
Arnav just stared at her
for a few minutes more, trying to comprehend what she was saying. Then he
grabbed her hand and shook it.
Friends...but Khushi..its
not easy to become friends with ASR!
Really?
Hmm...so what do I have to
do?
That...I will tell you
some time later!
He then walked off leaving
a stunned Khushi.
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They then took the car
back to the hotel and grabbed something quick to eat. Khushi was in a flowery
dress and just did not wish to change, especially with him staying in the room
with her. She knew what Nani was planning to do and she just did not want to
follow anything at that moment. She saw Arnav come out of the shower and sit
down on the bed. She then sat down on the bed on the other side.
Are you not going to
change? Asked Arnav.
Umm...woh...no...I don’t
feel like it! She said quietly.
Why is she behaving so
differently? She was fine in the day time, then what happened so suddenly. Is
it to do with the fact that Nani packed all those clothes for her. Oh
yes...how can you forget Arnav...the only reason she doesn't want to change is
because all the night clothes of hers are....but she could have told me and we
could have got her something else to wear. Oh this girl....he thought.
He then got up from the
bed and started walking out.
Where are you going?
Khushi asked.
I am coming in
sometime....you rest! He said and then walked outside the room.
After half an hour Arnav
returned to the room with a few bags in his hands. He then went to Khushi’s
side of the bed and made her sit.
Go and change your
clothes. He said firmly, while looking deep into her eyes.
Khushi then took the bags and walked into the washroom. She then opened the bags to see full sleeved night dresses.
Oh no...that means he knew
why I didn't want to change! Oh god...what will he think now? This is so
embarrassing. Hey devi mayyian..help! Now how will I go outside? She thought.
She then quickly changed
into the nightdress. She felt thankful towards him because she was feeling
uncomfortable before but now she felt relaxed in her bed clothes. She quietly
tip toed out of the washroom and went to the other side. She felt at ease since
she saw him sleeping. He looked so cute when he was sleeping so peacefully but
a total Rakshas Raizada when he was awake. She carefully slid into bed. She was
just about to turn when she felt a strong arm that pulled her closer to him.
She was now sleeping in his protective arms which were like iron grip, not
letting her go anywhere. She could smell the strong manly odor which pulled
her closer to him. She soon slept like that, having the most peaceful sleep
that she didn't have in years.
Another brilliant update
ReplyDeleteKhushi is so adorable
Loved her character
Arnav is so understanding
Update soon
Wow dat was a quik update although i loved it how he understood her blesss
ReplyDeletesuperb updt
ReplyDeleteluv it
summaiyasayed
Hey amazng update love it
ReplyDeleteLove how hes starting to understand her and also start to realises that shes not after his money
Love khushi shes sooo cute and innocent
Aesomely written
Cant wait for more
Update soon
nice one..........Friendship is always a good start
ReplyDeletei also want to go to Italy..........wish i was there enjoying(one day i will)
cant wait for more
GunM (IF)
awww that was so cute
ReplyDeleteThey actually went out and Arnav got to learn so much about her
I'd like it if Khushi got to know about his other side too
YAY they're friends now
& can sleep with each other..cute!
All in Good time! :) I promise!
Deletethey are both so understanding I love them
ReplyDeletewow!
ReplyDeleteMISTIE,IF
awesome update.............. i really loved it......
ReplyDeleteespecially Arnav understands her and brought night dress for her........
from jenji08
looks like there relationship is moving slowly and getting to a point of comfartableness.loved the update. i want to know what arnav wants her to do in order for them to be friends...
ReplyDeletegreat update...really liked it:)
ReplyDeleteloved it...awesum updt.....so now arnavs bad impression is changing abt khushi ...and also he started knowing her....continue sooon.....
ReplyDeleteushankitvc
Brilliant update.. Specially loved the balloon part..
ReplyDeleteHumayra(IF)
Awesome update
ReplyDeleteA lovely update & I like they are becoming friends but I also expected a lot of sexual tension between them if they are attracted to each other, especially considering how ASR was described to have voracious appetite for woman earlier in the story.
ReplyDeleteI understand it is about love now, but there would still be undercurrents of desire I feel????
Can't wait for the next update & hope it is very soon as I am loving this story & considering how you described ASR I'm looking forward to when they do become aware of their love!!!
Nice update...they both r behaving like friends nw which is a gud start...kushi shared some of her past stories with him and he realised she isn't a gold-digger...it's nice of him to understand her tht she isn't comfortable with the night dress and bought her new ones...waiting to read hw their relation is going to get better..pls continue soon...
ReplyDeleteAnna b(if)
Awesome:)
ReplyDeleteLoved this part ... Friends
ReplyDeleteFinally they are letting their inhibitions down!
ReplyDeleteGlad to see Khushi enjoying herself especially after going thru so much crap,, Arnav is making up for the past and hopefully this trip will strengthen their relationship,, friends tak to pahunch hi gaye hai!!:)
loved the update!
ReplyDeletenow they are getting to know each other
they are liking each other for the person they are...its more than the physical attraction
I hope they build a strong friendship
arnavbarun IF
Good update
ReplyDeleteThey both are so understanding towards each other
Good to see that they both took a step towards friendship
Loved it awesome update
ReplyDeletekhushi is so cute wow both are friends now
Arnav is so sweet,carrying and understanding
can't wait for next part continue soon please
Nice update. Arnav is understanding her and is caring.. he got her new set of night dress, so that she is comfortable. He was also trying to discover Khushi more during their sight seeing venture..Great progress...Reality Truth
ReplyDeleteloved the update beautifully done glad he is realizing she is not after his money and saw how innocent and sweet she is loved that he realized she did not want to change because of the clothes awesome update
ReplyDeletethat was such a cute update .. loved it.....:)
ReplyDelete-Priya.1- (IF)
Loved the update..arnav was sweet,making her comfortable..
ReplyDeleteJust finished all the last 4 chapters & I must say each of it was superb. The honeymoon idea from Nani was mind blowing & I hope this trip will bring a change in their relationship. Waiting for some romance to blossom between this two.
ReplyDeletei just love your work.
ReplyDeletenice update
Excellent!
ReplyDeleteExcellent update:)
ReplyDeleteHey!
ReplyDeleteInteresting.
Arnav and Khushi has come far in their relationship and as people too.
Here he wants to know more about her career choice and education. The conversation flowed pretty easily.
Beautiful part mishty (newton123)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful part mishty (newton123)
ReplyDeleteamazing update
ReplyDeleteYay they are improving
ReplyDeleteFinally friendship! Good start. All relationship should start with friendship!
ReplyDeleteGreat update pleased they are getting along better.
ReplyDeleteLovely update...enjoying the blossoming friendship and care..thx. afifa
ReplyDeleteNice update. Thnks for the pm.
ReplyDeleteThey finally are friends. Glad to know a little spark has started! :)
ReplyDelete~ hello87_11
Good start with friendship.
ReplyDeleteLuv dimp72
Superb! (IF user Arshisarunfan)
ReplyDeleteoh ho he seems to be improving. good.
ReplyDeleteHi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! Well written! Khwaishfan (IF)
ReplyDeletepart 16
ReplyDeletenice...........
cute n swt update
ReplyDeleteSo cute !! Awww... (snapeseverus )
ReplyDeleteLovely upi....
ReplyDeleteAwww !! That was a such a beautifull update !it made me feel so good and light !! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteReally like how their relationship is growing!
ReplyDeletesakhter -IF
Arnav is changing.
ReplyDeleteHe is doing nice things for Khushi.
Gifttag (IF)
Amazing update. Flying balloons and throwing coins were really beautiful moments. Liked how arnav thought her as a child woman. Glad that he could understand that she was uncomfortable in the dress and bought new ones for her.
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