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Okay so this update is dedicated to Shraddha! Happy Be-lated birthday my dear!
Well sorry for the late update! I had a lot of loop-holes in my update when I was initially typing it. Well, if you find any, let me know!
Right - I hope you read my note here!
Note (Please read)
Love,
Mishty
Chapter 4
“I
am Arnav Singh Raizada! You are?” asked Arnav.
“Khushi
Kumari Gupta, I guess, now as Rohan is not with me! Thank you for saving me,
you didn't have to do that but you did! I owe you my life!” said Khushi.
“You
don’t owe me anything! I just did what anyone would have done! Come, we must go
back, the doctor has to finish your check-up!” said Arnav.
Khushi
let him take her back to the hospital room. She bent her head down and
apologised to the doctor for her appalling behavior and thanked him for saving
her life. She went to sit down and let him do her check-up calmly.
After
having that chat with her stranger, he didn't feel like a stranger anymore,
more like her guardian angel. He was right, though. She couldn’t just waste her
life. ‘Rohan’ wouldn’t want that either. He would want her to move on. After a
while, the nurse came in and offered to give her a sponge bath, and some food,
while Arnav one again stepped outside to give her the privacy she needed.
She
wanted to stop him, tell him that it is not necessary, but somehow couldn’t
formulate the words. He soon returned once again, inside the room. She was now
on the bed, analyzing his moves.
“You
are tired!” she said. It was a statement which they both knew was truth. They
looked away from each other. She wanted to ask him, why is he still here, when
he could have gone home. Arnav on the other hand knew that he had to tell
khushi the truth before ETF team arrived.
“There
are some facts you need to know Khushi!” he spoke slowly, annunciating each
word clearly.
“This wasn't a plain robbery case!” said Arnav finally.
“A
Robbery case?” asked Khushi, “This was never a robbery case! They wanted to
rape me, when Rohan tried to protect me, then they killed him”, she blurted out
with difficulty.
At the same time the door burst open with the
whole ETF team striding in confidently. Arnav stood up, ready to greet them,
while Khushi stared at them all in surprise, while they were looking at her
carefully.
“Who
is this?” asked Khushi, looking a little confused at the 5 members, standing in
front of her. She looked at Arnav with worry while he nodded re-assuring her
that everything was okay.
A
tall man stepped forward towards her bed, “Hi, I am Arjun Suryakanth Rawte, we
are part of the Emergency Task Force (ETF), and this is our Chief Rathod. That
is Riya, a research specialist. On the left is Shree, and that is Chotu.”
Riya
stepped forward and stood next to her on the bed, “We found out about your
husband’s death. I am sorry. We are here to help you. This is not a simple
case. We need your help, Khushi!” said Riya.
“I
am ready to help you, as much as I can, but can someone tell me what is going
on? They were after me and Rohan tried to protect me!” said Khushi.
“Protect
you?” asked Rathod, confused, “I thought this was a robbery case!”
“Ms.
Khushi can you please tell us exactly what happened from the beginning!” said
Arjun.
Then
Khushi explained the happenings, how there were 6 men attacking them. Then
Arjun filled her in about the stolen items, like jewellery but her anklet wasn't stolen. They were trying to make it seem like a robbery. When he
finished reciting it, she had tears in her eyes. Riya noted all the points
down. Riya then came forward and handed her a tissue.
“Khushi,
it’s over. He is not here anymore. I can tell from your eyes how much you loved
him, but please do not blame yourself. I know what one goes through when you
see someone you love unconditionally die in front of you! The pain you go
through is unexplainable. But please do not blame yourself. Your husband would
not want you to live a life, blaming yourself, in depression. You need to move
on!” said Riya. Arnav looked at Khushi, which was now in tears.
Although
she was speaking to Khushi, trying to comfort her, she was looking at Arjun,
while he looked away from her gaze.
Arjun’s
wife was murdered in front of him, and he blamed himself, because he should
have been able to save her. Riya shook her head; she could still remember when
her father was shot in front of her. That was why she joined ETF in the first
place, to get justice.
Someone
did say it right. Only your close ones have the power to hurt you.
Love
was a strange thing.
It
could give you so much happiness at one point, but at another point there would
only be despair.
Only
darkness shadowing you.
Arjun
looked at Khushi. Of course he knew what pain was. What she must be suffering,
he knew exactly. He had been through it. He knew what Riya was implying but
sometimes ignorance is bliss.
He
once again looked at Rathod, and began discussing the case. Riya, Shree and
Chotu were showing Khushi various pictures of what the killer could look like
all their suspects.
“So
Khushi, this is a complicated case. As Arnav pointed out, there was a motive.
So your life is in danger. They haven’t yet found out though that your alive,
otherwise the killer would have striked again. However your life is still in
danger so the hospital door will still be guarded by a police member! He is standing
outside. If you need anything, just ask him!” said Rathod.
“Is
there anything else you can remember Khushi? Yaad karo Khushi!” said Arjun.
“They didn't need to stab me! They could have killed Rohan and left me! I guess they
wanted to see pain in his eyes, but then again there was no need! When they
finally left, one of the men called someone! I can’t seem to remember what they
said!” replied Khushi.
wat an awesome update
ReplyDeletethats true dr inly the close one can hurt
love it
Thank you.
DeleteGlad you liked it.
Love,
Mishty
Awesome update.. Interesting
ReplyDeleteThankyou
DeleteMishty
awesum updt...loved it.....
ReplyDeleteushankitvc
Glad you liked it.
DeleteMishty
Fabulous
ReplyDeleteThanks
Deletehey awesome update
ReplyDeleteglad khushi started to accept the the truth and also help finding out the truth
hope arnav starts to help her move on
cant wait for more
update soon
Thanks, glad you like it!
DeleteYep, updated chapter 5 as well!
Love,
Mishty
superb updt
ReplyDeleteluv it
updt soon
summaiyasayed
Thank you
DeleteKhushi is really being very brave !! I wonder what is the real motive behind this murder and attack on her ?
ReplyDeleteThanks. Glad you like the concept.
DeleteMishty
Wonderful update! So true...only the ones you love hurt you the most. Thx. AK
ReplyDeleteYep...! :)
DeleteLove,
Mishty
Hi Mishty :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome update very interesting and different story
Khuahi start to accept the truth she's very brave
Yes. Thanks! Glad you like it!
DeleteLove,
Mishty
wonder why the men stabbed rohan
ReplyDeleteand you included the team from arjun=]
shes brave to be able to narrate what happened
Yes, she is! She needs to understand that this has happened.
DeleteAlmost like a reality check.
It sounds harsh. But that is the truth.
Love,
Mishty
Hey!
ReplyDeleteWell-written.
I'm glad that Khushi if feeling better than before. Thanks to Arnav :) Bless him. A beautiful soul.
On the road to getting down to the truth ...
Thank you. Glad you like it.
DeleteYep, love Arnav.
Mishty
Great update, I like it!
ReplyDelete-CB
Khushi has the support from Arnav
ReplyDeleteeven though he is not sure why he
is trying to protect her
oh man, I am glad to see the whole ETF team here! very nicely out! Loved this update! And, yes only closed ones can hurt you..:(, and that hurt is hard to let go....great update
ReplyDeletenikita59 IF
Fabulous update
ReplyDeleteMissmk if
Awesome........
ReplyDeleteWhat a writing.....simply superb....
Hope Khushi is Nw safe......
awesome update loving it loved the advice riya gave khushi loved it
ReplyDeleteinteresting update
ReplyDeleteawesome update .good khushi came back strongly
ReplyDeleteWonderful update
ReplyDeleteWonderful update!!!
ReplyDeleteOMG This is gettin really interesting
ReplyDeletegoing more intresting
ReplyDeleteprecious-pie(if)
Awesome part......loved it.. Where is her family or rahans family....
ReplyDeleteAwsummmm update
ReplyDeletepart 4
ReplyDeletenice part..........
poor Khushi............
Deepa (spvd)
nice update
ReplyDeletenice update
ReplyDeleteSo they finally know it's much more than that, i wonder why they wanted to Rape Khushi & then left her to die :S
ReplyDeleteCan't wait to read more and then find out
You wrote this chapter wonderfully!
Amazing update. Loved how riya(or lavanya) advised and supported khushi.
ReplyDeletevery good update
ReplyDeleteGoing to the Next Chappy!
ReplyDeleteWill give a detailed comment on Chappy 9! :) ;)
Nice update
ReplyDeleteAwesome update..
ReplyDeleteawesome update
ReplyDeletesuperb dear:)
ReplyDeletemandy 15
i just hope they are able to keep kushi safe
ReplyDeletejust got around to continue it now. got busy but back now. so gona read it and comment on each part :).
ReplyDeleteeveryone here is trying to help khushi but i dnt think it will actually help her just now. she will need time.