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Well another chapter, I am posting the next one as well. Romance is in the air for a few chapters - light romance.
Then I have to turn up the heat a little!
Love you all,
Mishty
Chapter 24
Arnav and Khushi left towards their
destination – the wedding reception. They arrived at were greeted by a couple,
Raj and Rakhi. They talked for some time on anything and everything. Arnav’s
hand was constantly on Khushi’s waist, protectively. Khushi had goosebumps on
her arms as Arnav’s fingers trailed on her back, sometimes squeezing, she was
trying hard not to blush in front of Raj and Rakhi, where as Arnav was amused
looking at her antics. Soon Raj and Rakhi whisked away to greet others and
Arnav & Khushi were left on their own, Arnav pulled Khushi to him playfully
and whispered in her ears huskily.
So Mrs. Raizada...you remember that
you promised me something? said Arnav.
No...did I promise you something? said
Khushi playing along.
Ofcourse you did...and you know that
Arnav Singh Raizada never forgets anything....said Arnav and then he led her to
the dance floor.
So ready to fulfill my wish? Asked
Arnav.
At your command....! said Khushi.
The Lights dimmed and a soft, slow
song came on. Arnav pulled her to him. He put his hands on her waist and
brought her forward and guided her hands to his neck to move in a low rhythm. The song depicted both their feelings, which were yet unknown to them.
Tu hai ab jo bahoon mein
Karaar hai
Rab ka shukrana
Saanson mein hai nasha
Khumaar hai
Rab ka shukrana
Tu hi ab mera deen hai
Imaan hai
Rab ka shukrana
Mera kalma hai tu
Azaan hai
Rab ka shukrana
[Rab ka..shukrana]
Tu mila toh sab mila
Ab kisi se kya gilaa
Tujhme simtoon
Aa mein bikhroon
Teri bahoon mein
Tu mila toh sab mila
Ab kisi se kya gilaa
Tujhme simtoon
Aa mein bikhroon
Teri bahoon mein
Fanaa ho jaon main
Tu hi ab duniya meri
Jahan hai
Rab ka shukrana
Khwaabon ki khayalon ki
Udaan hai
Rab ka shukrana
Rab ka shukrana
Tu hi ab mera deen hai
Imaan hai
Rab ka shukrana
Mera kalma hai tu
Azaan hai
Rab ka shukrana
Khushi...Arnav whispered in her ears huskily. Khushi opened her eyes. Arnav turned her around and Khushi just avoided looking at him. Arnav put his finger under her chin and lifted her face up so she could meet his eyes.
Laal he whispered in her ears.
What? asked Khushi.
Your cheeks and your nose are red, my favorite color replied Arnav, gently teasing her. Khushi lifted her hand to her cheeks in a daze. Arnav pulled her closer, making small patterns on her waist.
When you blush, you look cute, not like your usual avatar - a pagal, sir-phiri, nach-chadi ladki! Right? said Arnav playfully.
It took about 5 more seconds for Khushi to register what he just said to her, and then she opened her mouth, feeling shocked and as anger came to her like a lightening bolt.
WHAT? I am pagal, sir-phiri and nach-chadi! said Khushi, she pushed Arnav a little away from her and turned around while Arnav smirked thinking that his wife is back, from her blushing spree.
Look at what he did with me on the dance floor devi maiyaan?
It was so embarrassing, I mean what if anyone saw?
And anyway...he hasn't even kissed me yet but he’s thinking so far beyond that!
What am I thinking?
Khushi cribbed to her god in a low-tone thinking that she wasn't being heard but Arnav had heard every bit of what she said, and just smirked at her child-like thinking.
Khushi, why are you worried? They didn't even see us and anyway you are ASR's wife, no-one has enough guts to say something to you! said Arnav, it was then when Khushi realised that Arnav had heard what she was saying.
OMG, please devi maiyaan, let Arnav spare me otherwise his teasing would be never-ending, thought Khushi.
Arnav then turned her around so that she was facing him.
And what was I doing? You were just fulfilling your promise by dancing with me but if you have some other ideas - I don’t mind. Arnav left that as cliff-hanger seeing Khushi turn red due to her innocent shyness.
OMG - Devi Maiyaan help me! If she continues to turn red like this, I will have no choice but to take her right here, right now, against the car. She looks ravishing in this saree. No, I need to to control. It is probably best to get out of here, thought Arnav.
Let's go Khushi it’s getting really late! Said Arnav finally.
Hmm....let’s go...Khushi said.
They both sat down in the car ready to go back home. The journey home was in silence. The wedding reception was actually held quite far away from their home. It was a 2 hour journey. After half-an hour it started heavily raining and it was becoming difficult for Arnav to drive. So they thought to stop for some-time while the rain stops. After half an hour’s wait, the rain was still not stopping so Arnav thought to carry on with the journey, so he turned the engine on, but the car just would not start. He tried another two more times, but got frustrated and banged the steering wheel.
What happened? Asked Khushi.
The car is not starting, said Arnav.
Kya? shouted Khushi in shock.
Your car is like you. Aapne man ki malik. Lard Governor. Khushi said sarcastically.
What did you just call me? asked Arnav.
Lard Governor! You know because you go shouting orders at people and look your car is absolutely like you! It doesn't even want to start and now we are stuck. There are only forests in this area and nothing else, said Khushi.
Yeah well, it was working fine until you sat in the car! Your buaji is right in calling you a sanka devi! replied Arnav, clearly annoyed at her remarks.
OMG what a naughty and hot dance
ReplyDeletebroken car + rain + ArHi = hot romance :D
oh my got romantic dance.... waiting for next part....
ReplyDeleteoh god i cant able to stop blushing.....
from jenji08...
Wowwww!!! Nice one Mishty:) See i am not disappointing you by commenting on your blog;)
ReplyDeleteThanks! Nahh...it just makes my life slightly easier! I always knew you read my updates! :)
Deletelovely FF. Read all parts in one go and now cant wait for the next part.
ReplyDeleteThankyou, give me some time! Will upload it soon as finished!
Deleteaww loved the dancee
ReplyDeleteooh so they are stuck in nowhere
will anything happen=]
btw wondered,,how many parts is leftt?
haha....I aiming about upto chapter 30 ish! But I might go over! I don't know - but i don't want to drag it!
Deletewow such a hot dance
ReplyDeletehey mind blowing update amazing dance scene
ReplyDeletesooo cute and romantic love the song
beautifully descried and also written
cant wait for the next update
Naughty naughty raat aayi !!!!!
ReplyDeleteamazing update
ReplyDeletefirst the super hot and naughty dance
and then the teasing
and arnav and khusi's gutter thoughts
situation is so romantic hopefully "kuch hoga"
arnavbarun IF
Adorable! <3
ReplyDeleteSome romance, mischief, leg pulling and ending up with some suspense, nice one mishty :)
ReplyDeleteVery hot
ReplyDeleteWOAH THEY DANCED!!
ReplyDeletethis is getting more and more amazing
Now calling each other names and teasing each other is so damn cute!!
awesome update what a dance very hot and sexy loving the naughty asr glad they have started to pass their comfort zone and has started to reach the couple zone so cute when he was teasing her and dancing at the same time loved the updat
ReplyDeletewoow so sweet updt
ReplyDeletesummaiyasayed
Naughty naughty Arnav..lolz..
ReplyDeleteNice song..
Amazing dance. Arnav is becoming naughty every second and Khushi, she just crazy and making it easy for Arnav.
ReplyDeleteawesum updt...loved it....
ReplyDeleteushankitvc
Hey!
ReplyDeleteWell-written.
Very nice choice for the song. Beautiful.
Sexy dance. This segment was particularly written to such perfection ;)
Looking forward to the next part!
Awesome update
ReplyDeletedance part was superb
Khushi is so cute and innocent
haha love the end of the end
ReplyDeletethe dance part was awesome
great update loved the dance
ReplyDeleteDance was superb. Very well written. Can't wait for that first kiss :-) Thanks,AK
ReplyDeletethats also one of m favourite songs
ReplyDeletepassionate Dance....teasing.......alone in the forest.......super :D
GunM
passion is in the air
ReplyDeleteArnav at his naughty best! (IF user Arshisarunfan)
ReplyDeletehi thanks 4 da pm n awesum update! Arnav teasing Khushi! Khwaishfan (IF)
ReplyDeletepart 24
ReplyDeleteawesome...........
Deepa (spvd)
amazing one
ReplyDeleteprecious-pie(if)
Awesome....
ReplyDeleteloved it :)
ReplyDeletemandy15
Fabulous update Mishty, loving it & what may be coming our way soon ;)!!!
ReplyDeleteSomeone is getting bolder??
ReplyDelete;)
vidya
HOT dance! Their little fights are so cute!
ReplyDeletesakhter90 (IF)
Amazing update. Arhi dance was fantastic. Khushi s so innocent, she blurts out whatever going through her mind, and arnav s making use of it.
ReplyDeletehey its too romantic
ReplyDeleteeagrly waiting for the next