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Another update! I wrote two chapters but I wanted to break it up - slightly. So here is another one. I hope this update makes sense. I know what you all might be thinking. They are practically solving the case in the hospital, but let me tell you, Khushi is the biggest evidence herself.
She saw everything happen, first-hand. However, they still need to back her statements up with proof. I know there is not a lot of Arnav in this update. However remember that this is an investigation. It's different to all the other fictions of mine.
Love you all,
Mishty
Chapter 5
“Killer
tho hain! Par kuch choot raha hain!” said Arjun.
“Ab
kya choot raha hain Sir?” asked Shree.
“Agar
Khushi ko rape hi karna hota toh they could have easily shot Rohan and then had
their way with her. If they wanted to rob them, they could have easily
threatened them and they would have given their jewellery and money. The big
question is that after they stabbed Khushi, they killed Rohan. A person doesn't die from being stabbed. They could have easily taken the knife out and had
their way – but they left her there to die. At least they thought that she
would die. These were not any random killers, I think they were contract killers! They were hired by someone, to kill them! They didn't think that someone would come and rescue her, right
Arnav?” said Arjun.
“Exactly,
that is what I thought! There are too many loop-holes in their strategies!
Khushi were they wearing masks?” asked Arnav.
“No,
they were not! I can identify them!” said Khushi.
"Great! That means we can make sketches!" said Shree.
“Statistics
ke hisab se 90% killers who do not wear a mask, kill their victims so there is
no eye-witness!” said Riya.
“Haan
Sir, so that means that there was a murder!” said Shree.
“Ek
sochie, samjhi, saazish!” said Chotu.
"Khushi, we will send someone here to see you, and get them to make the sketches," said Rathod.
“Khushi,
humhe crime scene se kuch zyada nahi mila!” said Rathod finally, “we just found
two different blood samples, one was yours and the other was Rohans. Koi weapon
nahi mila tha. We found your car. As soon, as we matched your blood samples, we
sent Rohan’s body to the lab, to find the cause of death and the time of death!
Our theory matched your story. The death was due to the Iron Rod against his
skull, not the knife. We called in many of the suspects, but they do not have a
motive,” said Rathod.
“Yes,
we called in your parents, Rohan’s parents, the guests who attended the
wedding, but most have proofs of where they were, at the time of death,” said Chotu.
“No-one
had a clear motive!” said Riya.
“Khushi,
was there anyone who hated Rohan? Or could have a reason behind his death, or
someone who would benefit from his death?” asked Shree.
“I
don’t know much about his enemies, but two days before the attack, Rohan was
very stressed out about his business. He was saying how he lost a deal to his
rival, Mr Singhania. I tried to ask him about this, but he said that it was
just business issues,” explained Khushi.
Arnav
looked deep in thought.
“Who
is in Rohan’s family?” asked Arnav.
“His
mum, dad and his brother!” said Khushi.
“His
brother?” asked Riya.
“We
don’t know any brother!” said Shree. Arjun looked up.
“Oh
he lives in London, that’s why. Rohan said that he was coming back to India and
would attend the wedding. He also said that he would permanently shift back
here!” said Khushi.
“A
brother who just made plans to move back to India, before Rohan died!” recited
Arjun.
“Nahi,
Rajan was at the wedding!” said Khushi.
“Why
does he live in London, I mean Rohan's family is very rich?” asked Riya.
“Actually,
Rajan and Rohan don’t get along, so he decided to move to London, to carry his
education forward,” said Khushi.
“Okay
– we will have to interrogate him – Chotu!” said Arjun. He gave him an
eye-signal, and Chotu left.
“We
need to get back to the headquarters!” said Rathod.
“Umm,
can someone contact my parents please? They will be worried, from two days I
haven’t spoken to them and also my in-laws!” explained Khushi.
“That
is already taken care of. Right now they are in our custody; we need to ask
them a few questions! We have informed them and they know that you are in
hospital, but we need to ask them some important points and so they are all
under our observation. Take care Khushi, Arnav!” said Arjun.
They
all left leaving Arnav and Khushi in the hospital room once again.
Khushi
looked at Arnav once again. She gestured him to sit down.
“Thank
you so much for saving my life. I can’t thank you enough!” said Khushi.
“You
don’t need to thank me!” said Arnav.
“You
look really tired! You should go home! I will be fine here!” said Khushi.
“I
am fine! Your life is in danger, remember?” reminded her Arnav.
“I
will be fine! There is a guard standing outside remember? You need to go home
and change! Please!” said Khushi meekly.
She
was right he knew it. He needed to go home and change, have a shower, eat some
food, take a nap, but something didn't feel right. He wanted to go but not
leave her here by herself. However he had no excuse to stay. He looked at her,
and nodded his head. He slowly put her back on the bed and lay her down,
kissing her hand. He then slowly left her.
That
was one of the biggest mistakes he ever made.
awesome update
ReplyDeletelove it........... arnav should hv not left her
hope there will b no attack on her
Thank you. Glad you like it.
DeleteWell you will just have to wait and see! :D
Happy Birthday! :)
Love,
Mishty
thanks a lot dr :)
DeleteYour welcome.
DeleteLove Mishty
Very nice updates ... Hope nothing happen
ReplyDeleteOh god so....something bad s still to happen poor Khushi how much more can she take...
ReplyDeleteErggg......u stopped at such a cliffhanger....now how can I stop thinking abt it.....
Please update soon...
Sorry, haven't written more yet.
DeleteOtherwise, I would have posted it.
Love,
Mishty
nice update...
ReplyDeletewhere is his bro???
kushigowda
You will soon find out! :D
DeleteLove,
Mishty
awesum updt.......scared to read what will happen nxt....continue sooon....
ReplyDeleteushankitvc
Thanks....glad you like it! :)
DeleteItz probably his bro dat plottd all of this
ReplyDeletenice update x
We will see! :D
DeleteMishty
Loved
ReplyDeleteThanks x
DeleteJUST READ ALL 3 CHAPTERS.
ReplyDeleteI REALLY ENJOYED THIS CSI UPDATE
Cool! :)
DeleteMishty
hey amazing update
ReplyDeleteshort but defo sweet lol
love how he wanted to stay with her
scary ending hope nothing happens to her
plz plz update soon
I will update soon! :)
DeleteI am trying to give you all a fair amount of updates but I guess that is not working. Actually, I wrote over 2500 words, so I split up the updates myself.
Love,
Mishty
Great updates...please continue soon
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteLove,
Mishty
superb updt
ReplyDeleteluv it
summaiyasayed
Biggest mistake matlab ab kya hoga ??? :(
ReplyDeleteGreat update! Please update soon. I hope nothing bad happens to Kushi once Arnav leaves. Thanks, AK
ReplyDeleteAwesome update very very interesting Mishty
ReplyDeleteArnav is very sweet and caring
That was one of the biggest mistakes he ever made.
scary ending hope nothing happens to her continue soon please
ooh the ending=/
ReplyDeleteis the bodyguard the bad one too?
hope arnav will save her again
Hey!
ReplyDeleteWell-written.
I think its probably someone in the family or perhaps a close friend ...
Biggest mistake ... why? Will Khushi be attacked again?!
Superb updates ... This story has started with a bang ...
ReplyDeleteI hope nothing happens to her cuz of his blunder
Arnav left her alone when his gut was
ReplyDeletetelling him not too
No!!!! I hope he returns before anything happens to her
This is a great story! You write very well... Enjoying it! Looking forward to more.
ReplyDeleteAwesome
ReplyDeleteMissmk if
nice update. Suspense is really interesting, waiting to read more.
ReplyDeleteawesome update smart arjun and asr leaving her your leaving us on a knife edge awesome update well done sorry i am late with the comment work has piled on i the last couple of weeks
ReplyDeleteloved the updates. i wonder what was the biggest mistake?
ReplyDeleteJust awesome...
ReplyDeleteI hope Khushi is safe....
U scared me by last line....
Hope she Will be fine...
Thanks for mail dear...
talk about leaving it on a cliffhanger women what's wrong with you uff
ReplyDeleteOh no! Hope khushi is safe.
ReplyDeleteDimp72
nice .whats gonna happen.hope she is safe ...
ReplyDeleteNice update!!! Hope Khushi is safe..
ReplyDeleteWonderful update
ReplyDeleteBt last scene is scary
Hope Khushi is safe
Update soon
Nice update..
ReplyDeleteaawsome
ReplyDelete******
finally i read all ur post from last month its jst that i dont get enough time
bt surely cmnt ven i read
thankz for the pm
precious-pie(if)
Kiss her on her hand was a mistake or leave her nd go was a mistake???? Nice part..
ReplyDeletePlzzzz let arnav be dere with her aniwz great going
ReplyDeletehey just caught up with this. its really interesting. cant wait to read more.
ReplyDeleteSo there are few people in the doubt list but hope Arjun will find out the truth soon bcoz it seems like Khushi's life is still in danger & the last word of your is so scary. Y did Arnav leave her when his instinct told him not to.
ReplyDeleteNo no Arnav left her?
ReplyDeletepart 5
ReplyDeletenice part...........
who is responsible for this?
cont soon...............
Deepa (spvd)
hi mishty m ur new reader.....
ReplyDeletei really like ur this ff....
nice story.....
read all 5 parts....
continue...
update soon...
- Akorshi -
first i have to ask you big sry....... because now only i read Part 4 & 5...
ReplyDeleteits really very interesting........ sry 4 late reply...........
from jenji08
Nahh...its okay! :D
DeleteGlad you liked it.
Love,
Mishty
very nice update
ReplyDeletearnav is really supportive
very very interesting,thrilling update....
ReplyDeletei loved it
from jenji08
So Khushi does remember their face :O
ReplyDeleteThat's a good sigh
Uh Oh Arnav don't leave her!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice update!
Amazing update. Its really a different type of story. Investigation story with suspense. I enjoy reading it
ReplyDeleteOMG....lot of mistry...what looked simple outside...very deep rooted crime...
ReplyDeletevery good teaming up of ARJUN N ASR....
I always loved LAV'S CHARECTER IN THE TEAM...
Loved it! :)
ReplyDeleteNice update..
ReplyDeleteawesome update hope nothing bad happens to khushi
ReplyDeletebeautifully written... grt storyline...
ReplyDeletethe last part scares me a lot
ReplyDeletei hope he is able to save her again
a brother who did not get along with rohan hmm but could sibling rivalry be that strong?
ReplyDeleteexcited for the next pert.