Thursday, 21 February 2013

The Wilted Rose: Chapter 2


Writer's Comments
Well, another chapter. I am hoping you are liking this story. It is different to my other stories and the writing style is more novel based. 

This story has more depth and I hope you will appreciate that. 

Love,

Mishty


Chapter 2


He brought her to the hospital. “Doctor, please have a look at her! She is in a critical condition,” said Arnav. The doctor looked at the patient and agreed with him.

“Please can you fill out this form, we will take her straight in to have the operation. The stab of the knife is not enough to kill anyone but we hope that it hasn't damaged her internal organs! It’s good you brought her straight here!” said the Doctor.

He saw the innocent girl being taken into the O.T. Her face was like a rose, very beautiful indeed but innocent too. He stared at the closed doors before turning to the doctor.

“We might be able to save her,” said the doctor and left him to fill out the forms. The forms didn’t take him long to fill – however they were very confusing to fill. He saw the box which said ‘Relation-ship to the patient’. He was very confused as to what to fill out. He left it blank, hoping that no-one create a fuss about it. He was right. No-one did. As long as he made the payments, no-one did care who she was? Or who he was?

He contacted the police and told them what he saw and how he bought the girl on time to the hospital.

“Arree...! It is a simple open and shut case!” said the Police officer. Arnav was confused for a while.

“What do you mean?” He asked earnestly.

“I meant that the thieves were there to steal their belongings. They must not have wanted to hand over their belongings and in that the thieves might have killed them! So what is the point of an F.I.R, it’s just wasting your time!” said the police officer.

If the police officer was in front of Arnav, he would have been strangled. He calmed his breathing and said in a low voice.

“Do you even know you are talking to? You are talking to the Arnav Singh Raizada. I can get you fired from your post within minutes. The girl’s husband was killed. It is your job to get justice to the culprit, theft or no theft! Understood?” said Arnav.

“Yes Sir. Sorry Sir! We will definitely solve this case!” said the police officer.

“Good!” said Arnav and hung up the phone.




He was reverted back to the present when he saw the O.T. doors open once again. He saw the doctor coming out. He stood up, anxious to hear the news once again.

“She is now stable!” said the doctor. “However, we have to keep her in observation for 48 hours. She is very critical and could potentially go into coma! She is now shifted to the ICU!” said the doctor.

“This is a special case – I read your forms. You have found her, but we must inform the police. You don’t even know her name. It looked like she was attacked as all her jewellery is now stolen. It is a criminal case!” said the doctor.

“I know, I have already contacted the police. They should be on their way here!” said Arnav.

“Okay!” replied the doctor.

“Can I go and see her?” asked Arnav.

“Sure!” said the doctor.

He entered the I.C.U. slowly. He saw her lying down. Her face pale, like it had lost all of its color or like it had been wilted. Her features were well defined. He walked closer to her. She laid still, her arm connected to various monitors. He held her hand and rubbed it slowly. He shuddered to think what would have happened if he had not arrived on time. He was sitting there for hours. He didn't know what, but something didn't feel right. It didn't feel like an open and shut case. There was something more to it, but what?

It was then he saw it. The girl’s leg was peeking out at the end of the covers. Something silver shining on her ankle. He let go of her hand, and moved to see it. It was a silver anklet with diamonds. They were real diamonds not even American diamonds. He could tell. After all knew everything about fashion. In real terms, this would cost no less than £5000. It was something rare and priceless.

So why would the thieves miss this aspect?

Not possible. Unless they weren't there to steal at all, they were there to kill. It all made sense now, killing her husband, then stabbing her. Leaving her on the empty road, thinking that no-one will come to rescue her.

That was their mistake.

She wasn't meant to survive but she did.

That means that her life is still in danger.

He had to make a few phone calls. This case could not be given to the police. This had to go to someone else, “Emergency Task Force.” He knew ‘Arjun Suryakanth Rawte’ believed in justice and justice would be served.

He picked up his phone and dialed the number. He picked up within 2 rings. Arnav then explained everything and how he rescued this girl, and then how he brought her to the hospital and then he contacted the police. He also told him – how it wasn't an open and shut case. He waited for him to say something.
“I know what you mean. It could be though that they didn't check her ankles and just left taking what they could. However, it is a murder case, so we will thoroughly look into it. I will contact the police now and inform them that this case is now in the hands of ETF. Please inform us when she wakes up. We need to know things first-hand. I will get my team to work on this case!” explained Arjun.

“Thanks. I know you could do this!” said Arnav.

“Sure – just remember though that even you are a suspect now and so you won’t be able to leave the country until our investigation is over!” said Arjun.

“That is fine! I will be here! Tell me if you need anything!” said Arnav.

“Will do!” said Arjun. The call ended. Arnav looked at the innocent girl once again and sighed.

What had the world come to? 




74 comments:

  1. wow
    totally loved it
    this is really going to rock
    and that is evident from the 2nd part itself
    waiting for more
    aniee.h

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    1. AHh thanks dear! Glad you like it! :)

      It's just my imagination! LOL!

      Will update soon! :)

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  2. wow Arnav Singh Raizada and Arjun Suryakanth Rawte........ both ASR......... interesting......

    this ff seems very intersting frnd.......

    from jenji08

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    1. Oh yeah! I never realised that!

      OOOPPPPS! LOOOOL!

      thanks friend! :)

      Love,

      Mishty

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  3. Arnav figured out it was not a simply robbery

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  4. just amazing and loving the fact that uve included arjun in this one:)

    cant wait for the mystery to be solved and maybe their love story to start

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    1. Yep....I love Arjun and Riya man - they make such a cute couple!

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  5. He he Arjun here !! :)
    Arnav is really going out of his way to help out a stranger !!!
    He is gem of a guy !!
    I wonder what the real intention is behind this attack and as he correctly dissected that robbery was not the motive as in chapter 1 you had ended with those hooligans calling and informing someone about the job getting done!!
    V interesting !!

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    1. Yep....the ETF is here! Ready to help! LOL

      Yes - I changed Arnav's character here! I thought to make him slightly different.

      Plus it suits the story!

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  6. Very interesting! This is different storyline n a thrilling one at that. Ugh.. Hate the legal system at times. It's so frustrating.
    Arnav seems to be a commendable man in this one! Liking him.. Now wanna know more about khushi.

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    1. Yes - the legal system!

      But who cares about the legal system when your an elite member of the society!

      They just care when you don't have money!

      To be fair India is corrupt because of people who don't care about the society!

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    2. India is not the only place where corruption is rampant. I hail from Africa and trust me corruption is the call of the day. You right, name n status is what gets u thru. It's like I said frustrating.. :(

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  7. I love this story very interesting can't wait to read more
    Arnav help a stranger interesting can't wait this mystery to be solve
    very interesting and different story want to read more and more continue soon please

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  8. Vow!! U included Arjun and ETF also in it...nw dis will help to solve d case...:)

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  9. arnav is really helping a stranger....i mean not many people actually even think about helping in the world....
    arjun is here lol
    loved the update
    thanks for the pm
    continue soon
    kamalapushpa

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    1. Yeah I changed Arnav's character. He is a business man - but he will help someone in need if it comes down to it. Seek Justice.

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  10. Fabulous update..
    Arnav is so different here..

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  11. Two hot men in this Ss, interesting.

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    1. HAHA....LOOL!

      Yep...!

      Definitely 2 hot, sexy men!

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  12. awwww at least Arnav is there, he's actually getting people to investigate the case
    I wonder if family knows yet...

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    1. You will know that in the next update!

      God your mind runs on fast speed! :P

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  13. Hey!

    Well-written.

    I'm glad that Arnav did the compassionate thing by taking Khushi to the hospital, making sure her treatment is paid for and also that justice is served. Its ironic how if you have power, status, a name that people fear you sometimes tend to get jobs done. Just like how the Police Officer wasn't really taking the case seriously and once Arnav threatened him and spoke of his name ... BANG ... the Officer got to work. Its sad that things like this happen in some countries.

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    1. Yep - our ASR is totally compassionate!

      Yep because India is corrupt - power is the only thing that works.

      Well power or money!

      I am glad you like it so far! :)

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  14. Nice plot...
    Lets see how the story unfolds :)

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  15. Awesome update you brought the two asr together those officers are ridiculous stating that it a robbery so they can't investigate loving the story awesome update thanks for the pm

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    1. No- it's the fact that because it's a robbery - they don't want to investigate and waste their time, because they know they won't find the thieves.

      But glad you like it.

      Mishty

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  16. Dat was awesum update.
    wud luv 2 read further....

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  17. beautiful update
    amazing story
    thanks sweety
    Mitzi11 IF

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  18. great update loving arnav heling a stranger

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  19. interesting, superb
    missmk if

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  20. great update
    samia19 from IF

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  21. fresh concept.....
    i like it.....!!
    Beri from IF

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  22. wow..2 ASR working 2gether 4 khusi..interesting.
    -MISTIE,IF

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  23. intrestng. .u r very awesum. .hey mishty cn u plz snd me da lnkx ov ur other ffs? PlZ

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  24. Awesome update...
    Wow we got double ASR... Feeling sad for Khushi...
    Hope Khushi will fine soon... Of course she is safe na as Arnav is with her....

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  25. awesome updt

    luv it

    summaiyasayed

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  26. You know i just realized that Arjun surykant rautey means ASR i following this soap nd never realized that....lol.... Anyway
    ur arnav is seems to be a nice guy and intelligent as why he is doing this for khushi do he know her????? so why anyb'dy wants to kill khushi???

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  27. I thought arnav ne kiya hai.....but he is a gud man.
    Poor khushi

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  28. Such a nice update.hope khushi is better....loved your stories

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  29. Nice update. I love the way Arnav gave back to the police officer he was such a rude guy. Its nice to see ASR asking help from another ASR. Hope Khushi will recover soon.

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  30. arnav is soo good human being

    kushigowda

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  31. lovely update. ... I like how Arnav is so concerned about finding the culprits and also how he figured out tht it was not just a simple robbery.... cant wait to find out more. ... Arjun sounds like an interesting character. ... wanna know more about him as well. ...

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  32. Why is Arnav a suspect here? He saved Khushi. (IF user Arshisarunfan)

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  33. awesum updyt...so both the ASRs in action...going to be damn interesting....continue sooon....
    ushankitvc

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  34. Thank god she is stable now....and thank you asr for helping a stranger .... Though I did notice you noticing the fact that she was beautiful as she was being wheeled into OR ( giggle giggle).

    Open and shut case indeed!!! Humfs blooding police I tell you. Well it's good that arnav connected the dots and hopefully they get to the bottom of this

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  35. people like arnav are no more around and thts the most sad part.
    quiet an expensive anklet it means either she was frm a well off family or her husband was quiet rich or may be both. lets c what happens next.

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  36. Awesome one !!!

    ASR n ASR! Loving it! :)

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  37. hey dear...thanks 4 da pm! Interesting...ASR? Arnav takes her to hospital! superbly written ! Khwaishfan (IF)

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  38. part 2
    nice............
    poor Khushi...........

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  39. Story is getting interesting...enjoyed the update...Thx AK

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  40. sorry for commenting late! Great FF! Loving it! And, I love Arjun, a regular watcher of the show. So seeing him here and ASR just makes it more perfect! Really enjoyed it! :D
    nikita59 IF

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  41. smone this days giving bangon updates
    precious-pie(if)

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  42. OmG arnav and arjun both here im dying its sooooo intrsting feeling sad for khushi but hope arnav will take care of her...., thanx for this wonderfull concept

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  43. romantic thriller ....wow...nice change

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  44. Amazing update. U introduced arjun, that was brilliant

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  45. awesome dear:)

    mandy15

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  46. Awesome update. Good that Arnav contacted ETF as he felt something fishy about the whole thing. I sometimes hate cops. How can they be so irresponsible. How can they say its open and shut case even without basic investigation.

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  47. Just started reading it and totally into it....will read all the chapters in one go....tnk u for the blog link

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  48. ChevL

    BeUtiful wooow

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  49. i am guessing that phone call from part 1 will tell us a lot more

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