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Well, another chapter. I am hoping you are liking this story. It is different to my other stories and the writing style is more novel based.
This story has more depth and I hope you will appreciate that.
Love,
Mishty
Chapter 2
He
brought her to the hospital. “Doctor, please have a look at her! She is in a
critical condition,” said Arnav. The doctor looked at the patient and agreed
with him.
“Please
can you fill out this form, we will take her straight in to have the operation.
The stab of the knife is not enough to kill anyone but we hope that it hasn't damaged her internal organs! It’s good you brought her straight here!” said the
Doctor.
He
saw the innocent girl being taken into the O.T. Her face was like a rose, very
beautiful indeed but innocent too. He stared at the closed doors before turning
to the doctor.
“We
might be able to save her,” said the doctor and left him to fill out the forms.
The forms didn’t take him long to fill – however they were very confusing to
fill. He saw the box which said ‘Relation-ship to the patient’. He was very
confused as to what to fill out. He left it blank, hoping that no-one create a
fuss about it. He was right. No-one did. As long as he made the payments,
no-one did care who she was? Or who he was?
He
contacted the police and told them what he saw and how he bought the girl on
time to the hospital.
“Arree...!
It is a simple open and shut case!” said the Police officer. Arnav was confused
for a while.
“What
do you mean?” He asked earnestly.
“I
meant that the thieves were there to steal their belongings. They must not have
wanted to hand over their belongings and in that the thieves might have killed
them! So what is the point of an F.I.R, it’s just wasting your time!” said the
police officer.
If
the police officer was in front of Arnav, he would have been strangled. He
calmed his breathing and said in a low voice.
“Do
you even know you are talking to? You are talking to the Arnav Singh Raizada. I
can get you fired from your post within minutes. The girl’s husband was killed.
It is your job to get justice to the culprit, theft or no theft! Understood?”
said Arnav.
“Yes
Sir. Sorry Sir! We will definitely solve this case!” said the police officer.
“Good!”
said Arnav and hung up the phone.
He
was reverted back to the present when he saw the O.T. doors open once again. He
saw the doctor coming out. He stood up, anxious to hear the news once again.
“She
is now stable!” said the doctor. “However, we have to keep her in observation
for 48 hours. She is very critical and could potentially go into coma! She is
now shifted to the ICU!” said the doctor.
“This
is a special case – I read your forms. You have found her, but we must inform
the police. You don’t even know her name. It looked like she was attacked as
all her jewellery is now stolen. It is a criminal case!” said the doctor.
“I
know, I have already contacted the police. They should be on their way here!”
said Arnav.
“Okay!”
replied the doctor.
“Can
I go and see her?” asked Arnav.
“Sure!”
said the doctor.
He
entered the I.C.U. slowly. He saw her lying down. Her face pale, like it had
lost all of its color or like it had been wilted. Her features were well
defined. He walked closer to her. She laid still, her arm connected to various monitors.
He held her hand and rubbed it slowly. He shuddered to think what would have
happened if he had not arrived on time. He was sitting there for hours. He didn't know what, but something didn't feel right. It didn't feel like an open and
shut case. There was something more to it, but what?
It
was then he saw it. The girl’s leg was peeking out at the end of the covers.
Something silver shining on her ankle. He let go of her hand, and moved to see
it. It was a silver anklet with diamonds. They were real diamonds not even American
diamonds. He could tell. After all knew everything about fashion. In real
terms, this would cost no less than £5000. It was something rare and priceless.
So
why would the thieves miss this aspect?
Not
possible. Unless they weren't there to steal at all, they were there to kill.
It all made sense now, killing her husband, then stabbing her. Leaving her on
the empty road, thinking that no-one will come to rescue her.
That
was their mistake.
She wasn't meant to survive but she did.
That
means that her life is still in danger.
He
had to make a few phone calls. This case could not be given to the police. This
had to go to someone else, “Emergency Task Force.” He knew ‘Arjun Suryakanth Rawte’
believed in justice and justice would be served.
He
picked up his phone and dialed the number. He picked up within 2 rings. Arnav
then explained everything and how he rescued this girl, and then how he brought
her to the hospital and then he contacted the police. He also told him – how it wasn't an open and shut case. He waited for him to say something.
“I
know what you mean. It could be though that they didn't check her ankles and
just left taking what they could. However, it is a murder case, so we will
thoroughly look into it. I will contact the police now and inform them that
this case is now in the hands of ETF. Please inform us when she wakes up. We
need to know things first-hand. I will get my team to work on this case!”
explained Arjun.
“Thanks.
I know you could do this!” said Arnav.
“Sure
– just remember though that even you are a suspect now and so you won’t be able
to leave the country until our investigation is over!” said Arjun.
“That
is fine! I will be here! Tell me if you need anything!” said Arnav.
“Will
do!” said Arjun. The call ended. Arnav looked at the innocent girl once again
and sighed.
What had the world come to?
wow
ReplyDeletetotally loved it
this is really going to rock
and that is evident from the 2nd part itself
waiting for more
aniee.h
AHh thanks dear! Glad you like it! :)
DeleteIt's just my imagination! LOL!
Will update soon! :)
wow Arnav Singh Raizada and Arjun Suryakanth Rawte........ both ASR......... interesting......
ReplyDeletethis ff seems very intersting frnd.......
from jenji08
Oh yeah! I never realised that!
DeleteOOOPPPPS! LOOOOL!
thanks friend! :)
Love,
Mishty
Arnav figured out it was not a simply robbery
ReplyDeletejust amazing and loving the fact that uve included arjun in this one:)
ReplyDeletecant wait for the mystery to be solved and maybe their love story to start
Yep....I love Arjun and Riya man - they make such a cute couple!
DeleteASR ASR WOOW AMAZING
ReplyDeleteGlad you like it!
DeleteLove,
Mishty
wow, love it
ReplyDeleteThankyou x
DeleteHe he Arjun here !! :)
ReplyDeleteArnav is really going out of his way to help out a stranger !!!
He is gem of a guy !!
I wonder what the real intention is behind this attack and as he correctly dissected that robbery was not the motive as in chapter 1 you had ended with those hooligans calling and informing someone about the job getting done!!
V interesting !!
Yep....the ETF is here! Ready to help! LOL
DeleteYes - I changed Arnav's character here! I thought to make him slightly different.
Plus it suits the story!
Very interesting! This is different storyline n a thrilling one at that. Ugh.. Hate the legal system at times. It's so frustrating.
ReplyDeleteArnav seems to be a commendable man in this one! Liking him.. Now wanna know more about khushi.
Yes - the legal system!
DeleteBut who cares about the legal system when your an elite member of the society!
They just care when you don't have money!
To be fair India is corrupt because of people who don't care about the society!
India is not the only place where corruption is rampant. I hail from Africa and trust me corruption is the call of the day. You right, name n status is what gets u thru. It's like I said frustrating.. :(
DeleteI love this story very interesting can't wait to read more
ReplyDeleteArnav help a stranger interesting can't wait this mystery to be solve
very interesting and different story want to read more and more continue soon please
I am glad you like it! :)
DeleteThanks x
Vow!! U included Arjun and ETF also in it...nw dis will help to solve d case...:)
ReplyDeleteHAHAHA....LOL!
Deletearnav is really helping a stranger....i mean not many people actually even think about helping in the world....
ReplyDeletearjun is here lol
loved the update
thanks for the pm
continue soon
kamalapushpa
Yeah I changed Arnav's character. He is a business man - but he will help someone in need if it comes down to it. Seek Justice.
DeleteFabulous update..
ReplyDeleteArnav is so different here..
Yep! Thanks
Deleteglad you like it!
Love,
Mishty
Wonderful
ReplyDeleteAhh thanks x
Deletenice
ReplyDeletevery interesting
Thanks
DeleteLove,
Mishty
Two hot men in this Ss, interesting.
ReplyDeleteHAHA....LOOL!
DeleteYep...!
Definitely 2 hot, sexy men!
awwww at least Arnav is there, he's actually getting people to investigate the case
ReplyDeleteI wonder if family knows yet...
You will know that in the next update!
DeleteGod your mind runs on fast speed! :P
Hey!
ReplyDeleteWell-written.
I'm glad that Arnav did the compassionate thing by taking Khushi to the hospital, making sure her treatment is paid for and also that justice is served. Its ironic how if you have power, status, a name that people fear you sometimes tend to get jobs done. Just like how the Police Officer wasn't really taking the case seriously and once Arnav threatened him and spoke of his name ... BANG ... the Officer got to work. Its sad that things like this happen in some countries.
Yep - our ASR is totally compassionate!
DeleteYep because India is corrupt - power is the only thing that works.
Well power or money!
I am glad you like it so far! :)
Nice plot...
ReplyDeleteLets see how the story unfolds :)
Awesome update you brought the two asr together those officers are ridiculous stating that it a robbery so they can't investigate loving the story awesome update thanks for the pm
ReplyDeleteNo- it's the fact that because it's a robbery - they don't want to investigate and waste their time, because they know they won't find the thieves.
DeleteBut glad you like it.
Mishty
Dat was awesum update.
ReplyDeletewud luv 2 read further....
beautiful update
ReplyDeleteamazing story
thanks sweety
Mitzi11 IF
great update loving arnav heling a stranger
ReplyDeleteinteresting, superb
ReplyDeletemissmk if
great update
ReplyDeletesamia19 from IF
fresh concept.....
ReplyDeletei like it.....!!
Beri from IF
wow..2 ASR working 2gether 4 khusi..interesting.
ReplyDelete-MISTIE,IF
intrestng. .u r very awesum. .hey mishty cn u plz snd me da lnkx ov ur other ffs? PlZ
ReplyDeleteOkay sure.
DeleteAwesome update...
ReplyDeleteWow we got double ASR... Feeling sad for Khushi...
Hope Khushi will fine soon... Of course she is safe na as Arnav is with her....
awesome updt
ReplyDeleteluv it
summaiyasayed
You know i just realized that Arjun surykant rautey means ASR i following this soap nd never realized that....lol.... Anyway
ReplyDeleteur arnav is seems to be a nice guy and intelligent as why he is doing this for khushi do he know her????? so why anyb'dy wants to kill khushi???
I thought arnav ne kiya hai.....but he is a gud man.
ReplyDeletePoor khushi
Such a nice update.hope khushi is better....loved your stories
ReplyDeleteNice update. I love the way Arnav gave back to the police officer he was such a rude guy. Its nice to see ASR asking help from another ASR. Hope Khushi will recover soon.
ReplyDeletearnav is soo good human being
ReplyDeletekushigowda
lovely update. ... I like how Arnav is so concerned about finding the culprits and also how he figured out tht it was not just a simple robbery.... cant wait to find out more. ... Arjun sounds like an interesting character. ... wanna know more about him as well. ...
ReplyDeleteWhy is Arnav a suspect here? He saved Khushi. (IF user Arshisarunfan)
ReplyDeleteawesum updyt...so both the ASRs in action...going to be damn interesting....continue sooon....
ReplyDeleteushankitvc
Thank god she is stable now....and thank you asr for helping a stranger .... Though I did notice you noticing the fact that she was beautiful as she was being wheeled into OR ( giggle giggle).
ReplyDeleteOpen and shut case indeed!!! Humfs blooding police I tell you. Well it's good that arnav connected the dots and hopefully they get to the bottom of this
people like arnav are no more around and thts the most sad part.
ReplyDeletequiet an expensive anklet it means either she was frm a well off family or her husband was quiet rich or may be both. lets c what happens next.
Awesome one !!!
ReplyDeleteASR n ASR! Loving it! :)
hey dear...thanks 4 da pm! Interesting...ASR? Arnav takes her to hospital! superbly written ! Khwaishfan (IF)
ReplyDeletepart 2
ReplyDeletenice............
poor Khushi...........
Story is getting interesting...enjoyed the update...Thx AK
ReplyDeletesorry for commenting late! Great FF! Loving it! And, I love Arjun, a regular watcher of the show. So seeing him here and ASR just makes it more perfect! Really enjoyed it! :D
ReplyDeletenikita59 IF
smone this days giving bangon updates
ReplyDeleteprecious-pie(if)
OmG arnav and arjun both here im dying its sooooo intrsting feeling sad for khushi but hope arnav will take care of her...., thanx for this wonderfull concept
ReplyDeleteromantic thriller ....wow...nice change
ReplyDeleteAmazing update. U introduced arjun, that was brilliant
ReplyDeletePoor khushi.....sad for her
ReplyDeleteArjun...lol....nice....
ReplyDeleteawesome dear:)
ReplyDeletemandy15
Awesome update. Good that Arnav contacted ETF as he felt something fishy about the whole thing. I sometimes hate cops. How can they be so irresponsible. How can they say its open and shut case even without basic investigation.
ReplyDeleteJust started reading it and totally into it....will read all the chapters in one go....tnk u for the blog link
ReplyDeleteChevL
ReplyDeleteBeUtiful wooow
i am guessing that phone call from part 1 will tell us a lot more
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