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Well, I am back with a new story! It is an SS so will last max upto 4 parts ish!
Well do tell me how you like it! :)
Love,
Mishty
Well do tell me how you like it! :)
Love,
Mishty
Chapter 1
The
pain was too much to bare. She was left on the road to die. Her arms were
bleeding heavily, with the knife still stabbed in her ribs. She looked across
her and saw her husband lying down in a pool of his own blood. Gone. Forever.
He had left her to face this cruel world on her own, knowing that she would
fail. She tried to scream, but her throat was too sore. She felt trapped. She
wanted to die so she could live her happy ever after with her husband. Her neck
felt bare.
Gone
was her happiness.
The
only thing left was despair.
She
closed her eyes to see white light. It was like she was in heaven already.
Angels were calling after her. She could see her husband with his arms out
trying to call her, but he became unfocused. He was moving away from her. She
tried to reach out but couldn’t hold him. The angels were taking him away,
saying that he was being taken care of.
She
remembered how just 24 hours ago, it was their wedding. Everything had been
fantastic. She had felt like the luckiest girl in the world. She was getting
married to her child-hood love, “Rohan”. He was everything a girl would ever
dream of. He was the Prince Charming. She remembered all the Salman Khan movies
that she had watched, and how she wished that she was whisked away by a Prince
Charming. They had decided to get married after attaining their family’s
approval.
The
marriage had been conducted successfully and they were sent off in a car. They
were on their way to their new home when Rohan stopped the car suddenly. Rohan
and Khushi came out to see 6 men on 3 bikes had stopped their car. Rohan could
see the fear in his beloved’s eyes. He took hold of her hand and dragged her
behind him. The 6 men had got off their bike and now surrounded them, having a
weapon in their hand.
“Surrender
the girl to us and we won’t harm you! Look at the girl; she is so pretty, I bet
she will scream when we screw her! But will she able to handle us all?” a man
shouted. “You can always get another woman, give her to us!” said another.
Rohan
stood in front of her. “She is not going anywhere! She is mine and only mine,”
shouted Rohan.
“Have
it your way!” said the same man. Soon they were attacked by them. Rohan tried
to take as many men out as he could, however the men had weapons where as he
was unarmed. He was also trying to protect his wife. One man grabbed Khushi
from his arm and slapped her across her face, drawing blood from her mouth, while
two of the other men held Rohan.
“You
could have saved her life, by giving her up but since you didn’t, you can watch
her die!” said one of the men. The man plunged a knife through her ribs, while
Rohan screamed her name. He tried to shake the men off and kicked them hard
while punching them in the stomach. He attacked the man who hurt his Khushi. He
saw Khushi fall onto the ground with the knife still in her.
One
of the men attacked Rohan from behind. An Iron rod smashed his skull while a
dagger was plunged into his chest. His screams echoed the empty roads. A bullet
though his skull. He was dead.
The
6 men grinned triumphantly. They called up their boss. “The work is done Sir!
He is dead, he won’t trouble you now! The girl is heavily injured. We will
leave her to die! On this street, no-one will come to save her, even if she
screams her lungs out!” said the man, smirking.
They took of the woman’s jewellery and took all their belongings. The
goons soon left with their bikes.
Khushi
was soon brought back from the past as she felt someone nudge her. She opened
her eyes, seeing a man in his late 20’s look up at her. He was trying to say
something, but she couldn’t make sense of it. Eventually he stopped nudging
her. She saw him on the phone, talking in a panicked voice. She couldn’t make
out what he was saying but she could tell from his expressions that he was
really worried.
She
closed her eyes once again, letting the darkness over-take her yet again. She
could hear the foot-steps and the cooing of the birds, the whoosh of the air
and someone’s heart-beats. At one point, she felt like she was floating, in
limbo.
Nothing
mattered anymore.
If
in the morning she was a rose, well now she was a wilted rose.
The
love of her life was dead. She wanted her story to be a happy-ending but it
looked like God preferred tragedies like Romeo & Juliet in real life.
It
had been 24 hours since that incident but the doctors still didn’t say
anything. Her condition was critical. It was like she didn’t want to love
anymore. She had given up on her life. He could still remember how he found
her.
He
was driving to his office at late night due to an important conference meeting.
He was driving when he saw something red; he suddenly braked heavily to get the
car to a stand-still. He stepped out, ready to curse the person, when he found
two bodies on the main road while their car was abandoned on the side of the
road. He could see the couple were newly married as they had their attire on.
The girl was dresses in a heavy joda with the sindoor in her maang. However he
couldn’t find the mangalsutra or any jewellery on her. The guy was wearing a sherwani covered in
blood with no wallet or watch on, meaning that it had probably been stolen.
He
immediately checked the pulse of the guy. He was dead, and then he moved to the
girl. Her heart was still beating which meant that she was still alive. If had
not stopped the car, he would have driven over them.
At
that precise moment, he didn't know what to do. He could call the ambulance but
it might be too late. He would have to inform the police because it wasn't a
straight forward case. However, he would have to save the girl. He walked towards
her, he tried to nudge her, and she opened her eye – only to look dazed up at
him. He picked her up and drove her to
the nearest hospital. He must have broken all the speed limits at that time.
nyc.
ReplyDeleteMISTIE,IF
oh no you made me cry........................
ReplyDeletei think Arnav saved Khushi............
from jenji08
This was emotional. Poor Khushi lost her hubby on her wedding day & the guy who saved her is Arnav I believe. Mayb there will be a new beginning in her life she will never wilt.
ReplyDeletehey awesome new story really emotional
ReplyDeletepoor khushi she lost her husband in such a awful way and too on her wedding day how holible
guess that arnav at the end hope he can save her
cant wait for the next update
new story its amazing
ReplyDeletefantastic start.
continue soon
Fantastic story too sad for khusi
ReplyDeleteThat was mindblowing mishy di !!
ReplyDeletePoor khushi lost her hubby but Arnav is there she has her life alive helping her !!
Lovely SS
Do update soon
Wow
ReplyDeletefirst the banner is outstanding n i loved the updates
awesome
aniee.h
Amazing Story!!! Waiting to read the rest...
ReplyDeleteVow!! U started a new story dat too soo with so sad opening...
ReplyDeleteOhh noo on her wedding day only she became the widow...dats so heart-wrenching...continue soon...
ooh sad startt=/
ReplyDeleteso khushi will fall in love with arnav?
poor rohan thoa,,who was the goons talking to?=/
Interesting...
ReplyDeletewow... dhamakedar start... brilliant
ReplyDeleteWow new story :)
ReplyDeleteLooks like Arnav is the guy who saved her !!!
Very promising and diff concept!
very interesting start
ReplyDeletepoor khushi and Rohan
Arnav is the guy who saved her ?
can't wait to read more continue soon please
love the new story. please continue
ReplyDeleteAwesome start they came their to kill him loved the start congrats can't wait to find out why they wanted him dead at poor khushi she lost her husband on the same day they got married rocking update
ReplyDeletewow....khushis husband got killed the day she got married.....arnav is the one who saved her right??
ReplyDeletehope khushis life is filled with happiness....
awesome start
kamalapushpa
So thus Arnav met Khushi...hope he heals her pain...
ReplyDeletenice start...:)
continue soon...
love it
ReplyDeleteyou made me cry:(
but love and continue soon
so sad her husband died on their wedding day
ReplyDeletebut who is behind Rohan's death
i am guessing Arnav saved Khushi
awesome start! poor khushi! cant wait to read more
ReplyDeleteFirst of all the banner is awesome..
ReplyDeleteSad start :'(
nice start
ReplyDeleteWoah this new story is mindblowing
ReplyDeleteSo emotional and sad yet so well written
Hey!
ReplyDeleteIntriguing.
Emotional.
Intense.
Rohan was the perfect man for Khushi. He loved, cared and protected Khushi. Those thugs were horrid. Leeches. Filthy good for nothing scum for doing something as they did to Khushi and Rohan. The things they spoke were disgusting! Inhumane.
great start was real sad really felt for Khushi
ReplyDeletesuperb updt
ReplyDeleteluv it
summaiyasayed
felt really bad for Khushi. ... She lost her husband on her wedding day. ..im guessing the person who saved Khushi is Arnav.... cant wait to read more.....
ReplyDeleteWho saved Khushi? And who was the boss of those goons? (IF user Arshisarunfan)
ReplyDeleteAwesome. Oh wow..she married Rohan and he got murdered. Jeez!!!! Must say as I started reading the first few paras I thought oh please don't rape her....but then she got stabbed instead.
ReplyDeleteOh my IF username is : shreyasonia
this ones diff...hmmmmm loving it though..m eager to see how the story unfolds ..keep up the good job :)
ReplyDeleteWOW!
ReplyDeleteGoing to Part 2~!
congrats on the new SS! Thanks da pm! Awesum start! Intense emotional update! Well written! Khwaishfan (IF)
ReplyDeletepart 1
ReplyDeletenice.........
OMG poor them..........
were they random people?
Sad but lovely beginning...Thx AK
ReplyDeleteravishing start
ReplyDeleteprecious-pie(if)
new concept....
ReplyDeleteWonderful start. Well written. Felt sorry 4 khushi
ReplyDeletenice
ReplyDeleteIntense writing....
ReplyDeleteThanks sweets
fabulous dear:)
ReplyDeletemandy15
such a sad start but got my attention
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