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I am not good with words - so personally I don't think this chapter has turned out well! But I had no more strength to re-write it!
Sorry,
Mishty
Chapter 28
It
was in the morning when they both woke up, cuddled together. Khushi looked up
at Arnav and gave him a sweet kiss on his cheek, while Arnav smiled. They both
got up and had a shower quickly. Today was an important day, for both of them.
They
came downstairs to see the family serving breakfast to one another.
Arrreee,
Mami ji, let me do it, you should sit down! Said Khushi.
Bitya, your mami
is pfit and pfine. You no worry! said Mami.
So
mami helped Khushi serve. Khushi then served Arnav, while he eyed her to the
chair, motioning her to sit beside him. Anjali caught them, and laughed mutely.
Oh god! My Chote is in love. They are so cute! thought Anjali.
Akash
can you please handle the office with Mama today. Me and Khushi have something
important to do so we will be out most of the morning and afternoon. Also Di,
one of our clients is holding a party in two days and we are invited, so I
thought I should just let you know. Me and Khushi have to attend, said Arnav.
Theek
hain...Chote!
said Anjali.
Alright bhai! We
will make sure everything is fine, said Akash.
What? This Lard Governor did not tell me anything
about this party. Oh god, that means I have to dress well and everything. What
an annoyance!
thought Khushi.
Cool,
we will see you later! said Arnav.
Khushi,
let’s go.
They
soon left, while the family was still having breakfast.
So how are the
preparations?
Said Payal.
Yep, everything
should be ready! The hotel staffs were informed about every-thing, so yeah it
should be cool! Anyway it is officially bhabhi’s last day at university
tomorrow, after that she will be free said Anjali.
Haan, di! From
our side, all the arrangements have been made, said Akash.
I just hope,
Khushi bitya likes everything said Nani.
Hmm....said Mami.
They
all got to work, arranging everything for the surprise in 2 days.
-
Khushi
and Arnav were in the car, while Khushi was constantly fidgeting with her
duppata. Arnav looked at her and sighed, knowing that something was bothering
her, and that she will soon tell him herself.
Arnav?
Asked Khushi. Bingo. He knew her too well.
Yes,
replied Arnav.
Why
didn’t you tell me about this party? asked Khushi.
Oh so that was what was bothering her! I knew it! thought Arnav.
It
wasn’t important that’s why. Also it is in 2 days. What was the hurry? asked
Arnav.
Hmm...okay!
said Khushi, while a smile returned to her face. Arnav looked at her nodding
his head, “Pagal” he thought.
-
They
soon arrived at Sameera’s flat. They had got the address from Aman. They looked
at the building. Arnav grabbed Khushi’s hand tightly and led her in. They
knocked on her door. The door opened on the second knock. Sameera was stunned to
see the “ASR” standing in front of him. She let them in.
So, what do we
have here? ASR and his wife, said Sameera while smirking.
You know ASR, I
thought you would be quicker in trying to get to me but anyway. Better late
than never right?
said Sameera while laughing.
So what can I do
for you?
She asked.
You
don’t know who you are messing with! snarled Arnav.
Oh really, you
must have shocked to see Nani, right in hospital? Said Sameera.
That’s how I
felt when you had slapped me that day in my apartment. How I felt when you
broke our engagement. I loved you! Said Sameera.
Love
is a word that doesn’t sound good from your mouth Sameera, said Arnav.
You
just like money and power, that’s why you cheated on me right? asked Arnav.
I didn’t cheat
on you! He came to me! said Sameera.
Yeah
right! said Arnav.
Plus, I thought
you had a good taste of women, so why did you marry her? Did you just pick her
off the street?
said Sameera.
And you Ms.
Behenji, do you even know how many affairs he has had? Asked Sameera.
Oh look, what an
adorable couple! They don’t even know about each other, said Sameera.
By
this time, Khushi had listened enough. She had only remained quiet until now
because she thought Arnav could handle someone like her. However her patience
had just gone by now.
Ms.
Sameera, you out of all people don’t need to tell me what my husband does. I
already know him, so much more than you or any of the other girls that he has
been with. You know why? Because I am Mrs. Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada.
He is only mine. I have all rights on him, not you! Since we are together, he
hasn’t been with anyone said Khushi.
Oh Mrs. Khushi
Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada? Mrs. Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada? Wow – you
amaze me! Your husband doesn’t even love you, what type of rights are you
talking about! I heard all the rumours. Mrs. Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada?
He doesn’t even like you as his wife!
I haven’t seen
such a besharam women as you, trying to keep a man by calling him yours, said
Sameera. Khushi had tears in her eyes,
listening to this. Arnav wiped her tears and turned to Sameera.
Sameera,
it is better if not say one more word. She is my wife. Arnav Singh Raizada’s
wife. If any woman matters if MY LIFE, then it is my wife, Khushi Singh
Raizada. Models like you have no value – you are just meant for use and throw,
said Arnav.
ASR – shouted
Sameera.
Don’t
Shout! Said ASR. Suddenly the door burst open, and Mr. Garg and the police
barged in.
You are under
arrest Ms. Sameera Kapoor! Said the inspector.
What? Why? Asked Sameera.
You were found
giving yourself extra bonus from the current company you have been working with
and stealing valuable clothes from “Rohan’s Fashion House.” That counts as
fraud, so you are under-arrest. Take her away! Said Inspector.
This is not
over! I will come back! I will get you for this! Said Sameera.
They
hand-cuffed her and took her away, while Mr. Garg stood grinning in front of
Khushi and Arnav.
Our Plan Worked,
ASR!
Said Mr. Garg.
Plan?
Asked Khushi.
Yes,
Mrs. Raizada! We were here just to provide a distraction. Actually there were
two more people with Sameera, awarding them extra bonus’s. So we had to make
sure that someone inside the company doesn’t inform her and so she runs away.
In the mean time, Mr. Garg and Aman informed the police and they got here
before she could pack her bags and run! explained Arnav.
Okay,
Mr. Garg! We will see you later! said Arnav. While Khushi grinned at him in
glee. She always knew her husband was intelligent.
Wait
but how do you know that she gives herself bonus’s? Asked Khushi.
Aman
went to meet one of her friends and offered her 20 lacs and she sang like a
canary about everything that Sameera could get charged for! said Arnav.
Hmm...said
Khushi.
-
They
back in the car, driving to Khushi’s college. She missed a lecture to come with
him in the morning but now she had to return.
Arnav,
did you mean everything you said? Asked Khushi.
Arnav
looked into her eyes.
I
meant every-word! said Arnav.
Khushi
about the affairs –
No
Arnav what I said was true, since we have become friends, there has been no-one
in your life! said Khushi confidently.
How
do you know? Asked Arnav.
I
know you! said Khushi. They both smiled, and reached Khushi’s college.
Another brilliant update
ReplyDeleteSameera is so cheap
Update soon
AN AWESOME STORY, AMZING UPDATE I HAVE READ TILL NOW.
DeleteBEAUTIFUL POTRAYEL OF EMOTIONS!
Loved it mishty.... :-)
DeleteAwesome :)
ReplyDeleteDimp72
Awesome update.
ReplyDeleteI Loved what happened to Sameera. That titanic bitch deserved what she got.
I loved how Arnav clamed Khushi as his wife and How Khushi spoke up for herself as Mrs ASR.
Bravo. Well done.
I am so looking forward to your next update.
Thanks.
Zafi
amazing loved it
ReplyDeletelovely and awesome update as always ;(..........this is my first time commenting on no.1 position so im very shy and nervous.mishty u r a fabulous & a sweet writer .i wish u always remain happy dont take tensions of comments.love ur arshi r/s from hate to friendship and now slowly slowly to a strong true love...............waiting for coerced alliance2 impatiently;(....................from ur follower sweety chaudhary
ReplyDeleteAmazing Update!!!
ReplyDeleteAwesome update....
ReplyDeleteSameera get what she deserved......
Arnav is such a perfect husband....
nice update.love their trust...waiting for the surprise
ReplyDeleteAww sweet update
ReplyDeleteLiked how khushi was so confident in arnav
Anther really gud update
ReplyDeleteamazing update!!! lovd it :)
ReplyDeletenice..update
ReplyDeletebut it was better if arnav wud hv completed the statement about affairs
excellent update
ReplyDeletewow amazing update.......... sameera got arrested ........
ReplyDeletei loved it..........
oooo so family is planning something for Khushi and now Sameera is arrested woop woop
ReplyDeleteToo good update
ReplyDeletesuperb updt
ReplyDeleteluv it
summaiyasayed
wow!
ReplyDeleteAmazing.
MISTIE,IF
amazing update
ReplyDeletejust loved
and loved it when khushi said that arnav only hers
Awesome update
ReplyDeleteSameera is so cheap she got arrested good she get what she deserved
Love Arnav and khushi both trust and understand each other :)
Family is planning something for khushi wow very interesting continue soon please :)
Great update! Another hurdle passed :)
ReplyDeleteSameera finally got arrested
ReplyDeleteArnav stood up for Khushi
loved the update!
ReplyDeletefinally sameera is away
but she acted as a catalyst
both of them showed their trust and love for each other
arnav now knows her so well!
waiting for the party
arnavbarun IF
sameera is a cheap retard.
ReplyDeletewhats in 2 days for which raizada are planning
sameera got what she deserve
ReplyDeleteand pfft she didnt love arnav
Aww khushi trusts arnav so much=]
awww I love the trust khushi has in arnav...sameera is super cheap...she totally deserved this
ReplyDelete..Anita..
love the update.
ReplyDeletewow
ReplyDeleteloved it
amazing
aniee.h
Brilliant chapter!
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for Chapter 29! :) <3
loved their understanding and trust towards each other
ReplyDeleteand Sameera arrested a cherry on the top :)
GunM
Brilliant update
ReplyDeleteMissmk if
wow what anji n payal r planning for khushi
ReplyDeletesameera got what she deserved
hummm looking ahead
Waiting for her to join ar nd obviously d party
ReplyDeleteSo a surprise party is being planned for Khushi ! :)
ReplyDeleteLiked the way how Arnav claimed Khushi as his wife - She is my wife. Arnav Singh Raizada’s wife. If any woman matters if MY LIFE, then it is my wife, Khushi Singh Raizada. Models like you have no value – you are just meant for use and throw, said Arnav. Khushi spoke up for herself as Mrs ASR. They both have trust in each other and their relationship has progressed so much that no one can create misunderstandings between them... Waiting for the next update - Reality Truth ( IF)
ReplyDeleteYourr story is super good; I felt SO angry at sameera for what she said to khushi but I loved the defensive responses from Arnav! Keep it up; It's Really good
ReplyDeleteKhushi98 (IF)
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awesome update sammera is so cheap loved that khushi stood up for her self and asr showed sammera her worth awesome update loved that they have trust in each other awesome update
ReplyDeletehi mishty this is chichi220 first of all thanks for giving me the link. mindblowing ff i read it thru n thru...loved the way the story transpired first strangers forced in a marriage then understanding and then friendship and now an attraction and love..looking forward for next update
ReplyDeletenice update
ReplyDeletekushigowda
Awesome update! I like how Kushi and Arnav stand up for eachother and their relationship. Hope the Sameera chapter is over. Thx AK
ReplyDeletepart 28
ReplyDeleteawesome...........
good understanding between them..........
cont soon..................
Deepa (spvd)
so sorry I haven't been commenting I've been so busy
ReplyDeleteread all the updates awesome as usual
read your SS sounds really good I don't think it will be finished in 4 chapters lol
hi saw u updated! Wonderful update! Well written! Khwaishfan IF
ReplyDeletegreat update pleased Sameera got what she deserved
ReplyDeleteAwesome update..
ReplyDeleteAmazing! So Sameera is gone, for now anyway! Surprise party for khushi?
ReplyDeletegood that sameera got what she deserved
ReplyDeleteloved the way arnav handled sameera...
ReplyDeleteupdate soon...
IF-- -Priya.1-
wow.. that was a nice update.. all things sorted out...
ReplyDeleteawesome update
ReplyDeleteContinue soon!!
ReplyDeleteNice update! Glad that Sameera is out of th picture! Glad Arnav spoke Khushi's importance. Looking forward to next chapter
ReplyDeleteNice!
ReplyDeleteamazing update as always
ReplyDeleteprecious-pie(if)
This was an amazing update. I love the way they stand for each other in front of that creep Sameera. Cant wait for the surprise party.
ReplyDeleteamazing update
ReplyDeletehey i just found this and read it in one go. its an amazing story and cant wait to read further.
ReplyDeleteamri123 IF
beautiful writing.
ReplyDeleteNicee awesomely written
ReplyDeleteCaught up...
ReplyDeleteRead all epi I missed...
Enjoyed and appreciate each and every single word you typed.???
I might not be a regular replier....but know this......
Thank you so much....
Tc shali
Great Update! I cant wait to see what anjali and the family have planned for them! :)
ReplyDelete~ hello87_11
Just realized.....this sameera had NT dialogue.?????
ReplyDeletewhen u r planning to update eagerly waiting
ReplyDeleteloved it :)
ReplyDeletemandy15
Excellent update!!!
ReplyDeleteHopefully now the focus will be romance???
awesome update ,,,,,,,,,,
ReplyDeletehmmm finally she is out frm der life ,,,,,,
fabolous story,,
update d next part soon
IF--hiddenpearl
i read through all the updates...the story is awesome *claps*
ReplyDeletedo mail me with the next update dear :)
Great one
ReplyDeleteWell done Khushi.Any relationship will be strong only with trust .
Vidya.
Beautiful Update....
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Update....
ReplyDeletegeetavarma24
GOOD THAT SAMEERA IS TAUGHT A LESSON. ENJOYED THIS UPDATE:)(IF:Arshisarunfan)
ReplyDeletegreat update.....!!!
ReplyDeletecontinue soon.... :)
divya1122(IF)
updates from the 1st to the 28th is done reading and it is awesome....
ReplyDeletemaybe next will be romance....
thank you...
hope you update this one soon!!
ReplyDeleteA beautiful update, it was very sweet, I loved it!!!
ReplyDeleteHope the next update is very soon!!!
Lovely update! Both confessed their feelings in their own way. Do continue soon.
ReplyDeletesakhter90 (IF)
Nice story read all chapters in one go.....love nani...:) continue soon....
ReplyDeletenice story.plz update soon .want to know the surprise.is it her birthday ?waiting eagerly...
ReplyDeleteRead all parts in one go.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutly loved it.
Please continue soon.
Gifttag (IF)
Just started reading your story….superb concept…loved all the parts….sorry Just started reading your story….superb concept…loved all the parts….sorry wanted to catch up with the story and want to give my comment….and from now on you will surely find my little note of appreciation after your updates…I am in absolute awe as it is very interesting and very well written…you are an amazing writer….cannot wait the next stage this story will take….very excited to read further….
ReplyDeletePlease dear send me a message on my Gmail account whenever you will update next chapter..
Please continue soon….
Amazing update. So they are planning suprise party for khushi. Liked khushi telling sameera that arnav s only hers, only she has the right on him. Loved arnav saying khushi s d only woman that matters in his life.
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