Saturday, 23 February 2013

Coerced Alliance: Chapter 28


Writer's Comments
I am not good with words - so personally I don't think this chapter has turned out well! But I had no more strength to re-write it! 

Sorry,

Mishty


Chapter 28



It was in the morning when they both woke up, cuddled together. Khushi looked up at Arnav and gave him a sweet kiss on his cheek, while Arnav smiled. They both got up and had a shower quickly. Today was an important day, for both of them.

They came downstairs to see the family serving breakfast to one another.

Arrreee, Mami ji, let me do it, you should sit down! Said Khushi.

Bitya, your mami is pfit and pfine. You no worry! said Mami.

So mami helped Khushi serve. Khushi then served Arnav, while he eyed her to the chair, motioning her to sit beside him. Anjali caught them, and laughed mutely.

Oh god! My Chote is in love. They are so cute! thought Anjali.

Akash can you please handle the office with Mama today. Me and Khushi have something important to do so we will be out most of the morning and afternoon. Also Di, one of our clients is holding a party in two days and we are invited, so I thought I should just let you know. Me and Khushi have to attend, said Arnav.

Theek hain...Chote! said Anjali.

Alright bhai! We will make sure everything is fine, said Akash.

What? This Lard Governor did not tell me anything about this party. Oh god, that means I have to dress well and everything. What an annoyance! thought Khushi.

Cool, we will see you later! said Arnav.

Khushi, let’s go.

They soon left, while the family was still having breakfast.

So how are the preparations? Said Payal.

Yep, everything should be ready! The hotel staffs were informed about every-thing, so yeah it should be cool! Anyway it is officially bhabhi’s last day at university tomorrow, after that she will be free said Anjali.

Haan, di! From our side, all the arrangements have been made, said Akash.

I just hope, Khushi bitya likes everything said Nani.

Hmm....said Mami.

They all got to work, arranging everything for the surprise in 2 days.

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Khushi and Arnav were in the car, while Khushi was constantly fidgeting with her duppata. Arnav looked at her and sighed, knowing that something was bothering her, and that she will soon tell him herself.

Arnav? Asked Khushi. Bingo. He knew her too well.

Yes, replied Arnav.

Why didn’t you tell me about this party? asked Khushi.

Oh so that was what was bothering her! I knew it! thought Arnav.

It wasn’t important that’s why. Also it is in 2 days. What was the hurry? asked Arnav.

Hmm...okay! said Khushi, while a smile returned to her face. Arnav looked at her nodding his head, “Pagal” he thought.

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They soon arrived at Sameera’s flat. They had got the address from Aman. They looked at the building. Arnav grabbed Khushi’s hand tightly and led her in. They knocked on her door. The door opened on the second knock. Sameera was stunned to see the “ASR” standing in front of him. She let them in.

So, what do we have here? ASR and his wife, said Sameera while smirking.

You know ASR, I thought you would be quicker in trying to get to me but anyway. Better late than never right? said Sameera while laughing.

So what can I do for you? She asked.

You don’t know who you are messing with! snarled Arnav.

Oh really, you must have shocked to see Nani, right in hospital? Said Sameera.

That’s how I felt when you had slapped me that day in my apartment. How I felt when you broke our engagement. I loved you! Said Sameera.

Love is a word that doesn’t sound good from your mouth Sameera, said Arnav.

You just like money and power, that’s why you cheated on me right? asked Arnav.

I didn’t cheat on you! He came to me! said Sameera.

Yeah right! said Arnav.

Plus, I thought you had a good taste of women, so why did you marry her? Did you just pick her off the street? said Sameera.

And you Ms. Behenji, do you even know how many affairs he has had? Asked Sameera.

Oh look, what an adorable couple! They don’t even know about each other, said Sameera.

By this time, Khushi had listened enough. She had only remained quiet until now because she thought Arnav could handle someone like her. However her patience had just gone by now.

Ms. Sameera, you out of all people don’t need to tell me what my husband does. I already know him, so much more than you or any of the other girls that he has been with. You know why? Because I am Mrs. Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada. He is only mine. I have all rights on him, not you! Since we are together, he hasn’t been with anyone said Khushi.

Oh Mrs. Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada? Mrs. Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada? Wow – you amaze me! Your husband doesn’t even love you, what type of rights are you talking about! I heard all the rumours. Mrs. Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada? He doesn’t even like you as his wife!

I haven’t seen such a besharam women as you, trying to keep a man by calling him yours, said Sameera.  Khushi had tears in her eyes, listening to this. Arnav wiped her tears and turned to Sameera.

Sameera, it is better if not say one more word. She is my wife. Arnav Singh Raizada’s wife. If any woman matters if MY LIFE, then it is my wife, Khushi Singh Raizada. Models like you have no value – you are just meant for use and throw, said Arnav.

ASR – shouted Sameera.

Don’t Shout! Said ASR. Suddenly the door burst open, and Mr. Garg and the police barged in.

You are under arrest Ms. Sameera Kapoor! Said the inspector.

What? Why? Asked Sameera.

You were found giving yourself extra bonus from the current company you have been working with and stealing valuable clothes from “Rohan’s Fashion House.” That counts as fraud, so you are under-arrest. Take her away! Said Inspector.

This is not over! I will come back! I will get you for this! Said Sameera.

They hand-cuffed her and took her away, while Mr. Garg stood grinning in front of Khushi and Arnav.

Our Plan Worked, ASR! Said Mr. Garg.

Plan? Asked Khushi.

Yes, Mrs. Raizada! We were here just to provide a distraction. Actually there were two more people with Sameera, awarding them extra bonus’s. So we had to make sure that someone inside the company doesn’t inform her and so she runs away. In the mean time, Mr. Garg and Aman informed the police and they got here before she could pack her bags and run! explained Arnav.

Okay, Mr. Garg! We will see you later! said Arnav. While Khushi grinned at him in glee. She always knew her husband was intelligent.

Wait but how do you know that she gives herself bonus’s? Asked Khushi.

Aman went to meet one of her friends and offered her 20 lacs and she sang like a canary about everything that Sameera could get charged for! said Arnav.

Hmm...said Khushi.

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They back in the car, driving to Khushi’s college. She missed a lecture to come with him in the morning but now she had to return.

Arnav, did you mean everything you said? Asked Khushi.

Arnav looked into her eyes.

I meant every-word! said Arnav.

Khushi about the affairs –

No Arnav what I said was true, since we have become friends, there has been no-one in your life! said Khushi confidently.

How do you know? Asked Arnav.

I know you! said Khushi. They both smiled, and reached Khushi’s college. 


83 comments:

  1. Another brilliant update
    Sameera is so cheap
    Update soon

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    1. AN AWESOME STORY, AMZING UPDATE I HAVE READ TILL NOW.

      BEAUTIFUL POTRAYEL OF EMOTIONS!

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  2. Awesome :)
    Dimp72

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  3. Awesome update.
    I Loved what happened to Sameera. That titanic bitch deserved what she got.
    I loved how Arnav clamed Khushi as his wife and How Khushi spoke up for herself as Mrs ASR.
    Bravo. Well done.
    I am so looking forward to your next update.
    Thanks.
    Zafi

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  4. amazing loved it

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  5. lovely and awesome update as always ;(..........this is my first time commenting on no.1 position so im very shy and nervous.mishty u r a fabulous & a sweet writer .i wish u always remain happy dont take tensions of comments.love ur arshi r/s from hate to friendship and now slowly slowly to a strong true love...............waiting for coerced alliance2 impatiently;(....................from ur follower sweety chaudhary

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  6. Awesome update....
    Sameera get what she deserved......
    Arnav is such a perfect husband....

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  7. nice update.love their trust...waiting for the surprise

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  8. Aww sweet update
    Liked how khushi was so confident in arnav

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  9. amazing update!!! lovd it :)

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  10. nice..update
    but it was better if arnav wud hv completed the statement about affairs

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  11. wow amazing update.......... sameera got arrested ........
    i loved it..........

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  12. oooo so family is planning something for Khushi and now Sameera is arrested woop woop

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  13. superb updt

    luv it

    summaiyasayed

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  14. wow!
    Amazing.
    MISTIE,IF

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  15. amazing update
    just loved
    and loved it when khushi said that arnav only hers

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  16. Awesome update
    Sameera is so cheap she got arrested good she get what she deserved
    Love Arnav and khushi both trust and understand each other :)
    Family is planning something for khushi wow very interesting continue soon please :)

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  17. Great update! Another hurdle passed :)

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  18. Sameera finally got arrested

    Arnav stood up for Khushi

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  19. loved the update!
    finally sameera is away
    but she acted as a catalyst
    both of them showed their trust and love for each other
    arnav now knows her so well!
    waiting for the party

    arnavbarun IF

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  20. sameera is a cheap retard.
    whats in 2 days for which raizada are planning

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  21. sameera got what she deserve
    and pfft she didnt love arnav
    Aww khushi trusts arnav so much=]

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  22. awww I love the trust khushi has in arnav...sameera is super cheap...she totally deserved this

    ..Anita..

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  23. Brilliant chapter!

    Can't wait for Chapter 29! :) <3

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  24. loved their understanding and trust towards each other
    and Sameera arrested a cherry on the top :)

    GunM

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  25. Brilliant update
    Missmk if

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  26. aayt IF hayed200924 February 2013 at 02:35

    wow what anji n payal r planning for khushi
    sameera got what she deserved
    hummm looking ahead

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  27. Waiting for her to join ar nd obviously d party

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  28. So a surprise party is being planned for Khushi ! :)

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  29. Liked the way how Arnav claimed Khushi as his wife - She is my wife. Arnav Singh Raizada’s wife. If any woman matters if MY LIFE, then it is my wife, Khushi Singh Raizada. Models like you have no value – you are just meant for use and throw, said Arnav. Khushi spoke up for herself as Mrs ASR. They both have trust in each other and their relationship has progressed so much that no one can create misunderstandings between them... Waiting for the next update - Reality Truth ( IF)

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  30. Yourr story is super good; I felt SO angry at sameera for what she said to khushi but I loved the defensive responses from Arnav! Keep it up; It's Really good

    Khushi98 (IF)
    xx

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  31. awesome update sammera is so cheap loved that khushi stood up for her self and asr showed sammera her worth awesome update loved that they have trust in each other awesome update

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  32. hi mishty this is chichi220 first of all thanks for giving me the link. mindblowing ff i read it thru n thru...loved the way the story transpired first strangers forced in a marriage then understanding and then friendship and now an attraction and love..looking forward for next update

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  33. nice update

    kushigowda

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  34. Awesome update! I like how Kushi and Arnav stand up for eachother and their relationship. Hope the Sameera chapter is over. Thx AK

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  35. part 28
    awesome...........
    good understanding between them..........
    cont soon..................

    Deepa (spvd)

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  36. so sorry I haven't been commenting I've been so busy

    read all the updates awesome as usual

    read your SS sounds really good I don't think it will be finished in 4 chapters lol

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  37. hi saw u updated! Wonderful update! Well written! Khwaishfan IF

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  38. great update pleased Sameera got what she deserved

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  39. Amazing! So Sameera is gone, for now anyway! Surprise party for khushi?

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  40. good that sameera got what she deserved

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  41. loved the way arnav handled sameera...
    update soon...
    IF-- -Priya.1-

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  42. wow.. that was a nice update.. all things sorted out...

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  43. Nice update! Glad that Sameera is out of th picture! Glad Arnav spoke Khushi's importance. Looking forward to next chapter

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  44. amazing update as always
    precious-pie(if)

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  45. This was an amazing update. I love the way they stand for each other in front of that creep Sameera. Cant wait for the surprise party.

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  46. hey i just found this and read it in one go. its an amazing story and cant wait to read further.
    amri123 IF

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  47. beautiful writing.

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  48. Caught up...
    Read all epi I missed...
    Enjoyed and appreciate each and every single word you typed.???
    I might not be a regular replier....but know this......
    Thank you so much....
    Tc shali

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  49. Great Update! I cant wait to see what anjali and the family have planned for them! :)

    ~ hello87_11

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  50. Just realized.....this sameera had NT dialogue.?????

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  51. when u r planning to update eagerly waiting

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  52. loved it :)

    mandy15

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  53. Excellent update!!!

    Hopefully now the focus will be romance???

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  54. awesome update ,,,,,,,,,,
    hmmm finally she is out frm der life ,,,,,,
    fabolous story,,
    update d next part soon

    IF--hiddenpearl

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  55. i read through all the updates...the story is awesome *claps*
    do mail me with the next update dear :)

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  56. Great one
    Well done Khushi.Any relationship will be strong only with trust .

    Vidya.

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  57. Beautiful Update....

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  58. Beautiful Update....

    geetavarma24

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  59. GOOD THAT SAMEERA IS TAUGHT A LESSON. ENJOYED THIS UPDATE:)(IF:Arshisarunfan)

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  60. great update.....!!!
    continue soon.... :)
    divya1122(IF)

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  61. updates from the 1st to the 28th is done reading and it is awesome....
    maybe next will be romance....
    thank you...

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  62. hope you update this one soon!!

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  63. A beautiful update, it was very sweet, I loved it!!!

    Hope the next update is very soon!!!

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  64. Lovely update! Both confessed their feelings in their own way. Do continue soon.

    sakhter90 (IF)

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  65. Nice story read all chapters in one go.....love nani...:) continue soon....

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  66. nice story.plz update soon .want to know the surprise.is it her birthday ?waiting eagerly...

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  67. Read all parts in one go.
    Absolutly loved it.
    Please continue soon.

    Gifttag (IF)

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  68. Just started reading your story….superb concept…loved all the parts….sorry Just started reading your story….superb concept…loved all the parts….sorry wanted to catch up with the story and want to give my comment….and from now on you will surely find my little note of appreciation after your updates…I am in absolute awe as it is very interesting and very well written…you are an amazing writer….cannot wait the next stage this story will take….very excited to read further….
    Please dear send me a message on my Gmail account whenever you will update next chapter..
    Please continue soon….


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  69. Amazing update. So they are planning suprise party for khushi. Liked khushi telling sameera that arnav s only hers, only she has the right on him. Loved arnav saying khushi s d only woman that matters in his life.

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