Friday, 22 February 2013

The Wilted Rose: Chapter 3



Writer's Comments
Okay readers of Wilted Rose - I have something to share! This story is dedicated to the girl who was gang-raped in the streets of Delhi. People could have helped but there was no-one to step forward at that time. There should be good Samaritans like "Arnav" who have power and should help to correct the corrupt world of India. People should learn to help others and stand against the crime.

So as I said - this is to salute the ones that already do. This is a very sensitive topic as you may know already. However this is what the cruel world is like. People don't want to know you! It doesn't matter if your dying or someone is raping you. Society undermines you and abuses you and expects you take it. This is the reality of our world today!

I have changed the story because particularly I didn't feel writing about someone getting raped. So please follow this story! 

Love,

Mishty

Chapter 3



The room full of silence should have calmed him as usual, but this time it had an opposite effect. It made him anxious. The whole night he was there.

 He didn't know who she was?

Who her family was so he could contact them?

He hadn't heard from Arjun about any of the investigation so far.

All that had happened so far was that Aman kept on calling him and informing him about his meetings, and that the foreign clients got very angry when they didn't find him there. That was all he was told.

He remembered to the time when he first saw her face. The innocence attracted him to her, like a moth to a flame.

He didn't need to do this?

But why did he?

Why did he help her so much?

He could have left in the hospital to the doctors. They would have looked after her fine; made sure that she was fine.

Why did he stay with her past two days?

He could have attended his meetings, met all of his foreign clients, and completed the deals. The deals he had left were very important for AR, if they didn't sign the deals, it could cost him roughly 30 cores.
Why did he call Arjun for help?

The police could have sorted out the investigation, he could have told them but why did he want ETF to handle the case specially. What was the need?

However the biggest question was why did he care? For that ASR had no answer. He wasn't the usual Good Samaritan. He gave money to charity but that was all but that was part of building public relations; it was a part of business.

He could leave now, but he yet he couldn’t. There was something stopping him. This girl in front of him was a stranger but her life was still in danger. Just because of his ego, he couldn’t just leave her unprotected. He needed to get her justice. It would be morning, in an hour and she still hadn't got conscious yet. That could be dangerous. He closed his eyes and fell asleep at wee hours of the morning.




Something wasn't right.

It was like someone was calling out to her. Telling her to come to him, yet she couldn’t. She didn't have the strength.

The pain was gone, that she felt before.

Yet something was amiss. She then vaguely remembered what had happened.

How they had murdered her husband? Ruthlessly, just so they could rape her. She opened her eyes in rage. However when she opened her eyes, she was expecting it to be the lonely road, with her husband, or in heaven, but what she saw disorientated her. The walls were white. She looked around to see that there was a television across from her, handing on the wall. On her left there was a side table with a water jug, and on the right, there was a sofa, with a man sleeping.

She looked at the stranger more carefully. His shirt buttons were open to reveal the toned chest, and his abs. His eyes looked strained because he had dark-circles under his eyes. It looked like he hasn't been able to sleep for a while. She tried to get up but it was more difficult as the needle in her hand was pulled as well. She let out a small scream due to the pain.




Arnav heard the small scream and was jolted awake. He saw that she got injured as she was trying to get up. He moved swiftly from the sofa and helped her get up. He put a pillow behind her so she could be comfortable. He noticed that her eyes were on the jug. He walked to the other side and poured some water for her. He helped her drink. He could see that she was confused with him being there, but right now the doctor needed to check her.

That was the most important thing of all. He called the doctor by pressing a button by the bed. The doctor came in flat 2 minutes. He walked through the door genuinely happy to see the girl was awake and was sitting. “Thank you, for calling me! I will do her quick check-up!” said the doctor.

Arnav meekly nodded and stepped outside the room. He took his phone and made a quick call to ‘Arjun. He picked up the phone in two rings.

“Yes Arnav” said Arjun.

“The girl is awake now! The doctor is just checking her! I thought you might like to know!” said Arnav.

“Yes, thanks for letting me know! We will be there in an hour! Let her rest till that time!” said Arjun.

“Okay, see-you!” said Arnav.




Inside the room, the doctor looked at the girl.

“You are very lucky! The man, who just left the room, saved your life. If he didn't bring you to the hospital in time, you would have died. When you came to the hospital, you had a knife stabbed in your stomach. There was internal bleeding, and you were unconscious!” explained the doctor.

“You should have let me die! Why did you save me?” asked Khushi desperately.

“I need to go to my husband!” said Khushi. “He is calling me! He is calling me to the heavens above!”

“What is wrong with you? God decides who dies and who is alive. You were destined to survive. The man outside was there to save you. Everyone has a time to go and it’s not your time yet!” said the doctor, trying to get any suicidal thoughts out of her mind.

“No – I want to die!” screamed Khushi.

“Let me die,” she said.

The doctor tried to convince her, but when chose not to listen and carry on screaming, his patience disappeared and he called Arnav in to try and stabilize her. Arnav strode through the door, listening to her screams. He soon could the situation.

Off-course she would behave like this. She just lost her husband and that too on her wedding day.

They didn't want her to slip in depression. Her heath was getting worse by the minute. Arnav then lost his patience. She didn't want to see anything or hear anything. He motioned the doctor to take out the needles. The doctor followed his instructions.




Arnav then took her arm and hoisted her up gently. She looked at him confusion but just followed him without saying a word. She had lost the strength to scream and shout. She was still weak. He took her out of the hospital room, to a secluded corridor, connected to another corridor. He stopped her then and turned her towards an old couple.

“Look at them, are you seeing their faces? Their daughter just committed suicide because her husband died in a bomb blast, two weeks ago! Can you see their sad faces? Do you want your family to be like this as well? Will you get happiness by seeing them cry of their daughter’s death? Heck – I just saved you because I was helping you! It won’t matter to me if you die, because I don’t even know you! Why should I care? For me you will be a memory, a girl who I tried to save committed suicide because she wasn't strong enough to face her life! If you still want to commit suicide, then I will not stop you!” said Arnav in a low voice.

Khushi looked at the old couple who were crying their hearts out, because their daughter had committed suicide. Her heart was in pain. The stranger standing in front of her was right. If she gave up on life, she will be giving everyone around her pain. Yes, her husband has just left her but she needed to be strong. She finally broke down into sobs. Arnav turned around to see her crying. He gently soothed her back, rubbing her arms. He gave her his handkerchief to wipe her tears.

“He is never going to come back is he?” she asked innocently.

“No – but that doesn't mean you give up on your life! This is your past. It has already happened and there is nothing you could do to change that! You need to live your life, you will find someone that you like eventually!” explained Arnav.

“You don’t know how society treats a widow! They are defamed publicly  No-one will marry me now! I don’t even want to marry now! I loved Rohan!” she said, “And now he is gone forever!”

“Look, you need to be strong. Society attacks the weaklings but you have to make sure you don’t crumble like they expect to you to! If they attack, you have to counter-attack!” said Arnav.

“Who are you?” whispered Khushi, looking at him in amazement. 



57 comments:

  1. felt very bad for khushi.....iam personally happy that you dint write about her getting raped bcoz i wouldnt have been able to read it then.....as i would have been mentioned somewhere or the other....
    arnav is already feeling a connection with khsuhi....
    looking forward to the next chapters where she will stand on her own feet
    loved this chapter
    kamalapushpa

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  2. I didn't realise you update almost everyday...just read all 3 parts in a go...I love this Arnav...he makes me want to believe there are still good people out there...thankyou so much for such a wonderful update!xoxo

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  3. Awesome part...
    Arnav is so good n mature...
    I just love d way he handle Khushi...
    I think Khushi is lucky.. She got Arnav after Rohan....
    Eagarly waiting to know arnav's life story...

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  4. Oh wow that was wonderful
    I guess people like Arnav do exist or else we wont be able to survive in this world
    Wonderful update

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  5. I am so sad for Khushi but with Arnav's help she will overcome this tragedy

    Arnav is already feeling connected to her

    cant wait to read more

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  6. Hey!

    I appreciate that through this you are raising awareness in a sense, opening up the eyes and the minds of some people who'd walk away ...

    As for the update, well-written.

    Emotional.

    I'm glad that Arnav showed Khushi those people that were suffering after their child committed suicide ... people are left sad, broken ...

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  7. oh Khushi is in so much pain. ... but I'm glad Arnav is there to help her get through all this. ... I hope she takes Arnav's advice to become strong n not give up. ...

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  8. wow!!!amazing story..hope khushi will become strong..loved the update

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  9. glad that arnav was there 4 her
    and wanna make her strong
    she has so much pain

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  10. Khushi was understandably disoriented when she regained her conscious and Arnav tried to reason with her!!
    Good emotional update!

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  11. Excellent story. Very very well woven

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  12. Awesome update
    I feel very bad for khusi
    Arnav is very sweet and caring
    can't wait for next part continue soon please

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  13. Awesome part....... Well i don't think they want to rape her they want to kill her.... But why?????

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  14. awesome update those guy did not come to rape khushi they came to kill her husband and they were not thieves the took the jewelry only because they had to make it look like a robbery hope asr can protect her from the true monster out there loved how he showed her the couple and how the are in mourning after the daughter took her life after husband died loved the update

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  15. I feel so bad for Khushi

    ..Anita..

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  16. great update
    samia19

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  17. very nice update.
    feels sad for khushi ..
    love arnav here

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  18. excellent update
    Beri IF

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  19. hey can u send me the link to Unwantedly Tied
    Beri IF

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    1. Link to Unwantedly Tied: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3447028

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  20. hey really nice update, thanx for the link to ur blog. I will definitely comment regularly.
    Gatru IF

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  21. awesum updt....loved the way arnav handled khushi....pooor and naive khushi...continue sooon....
    ushankitvc

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  22. Great update...loved how he made her see that she should be thankful to be alive and what she would be subjecting her loved ones to if she killed herself.
    So she was raped....bastards...bloody vultures...(sorry...can't help my self)
    Hope she fights back and castrates them

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    1. She wasn't raped. She was just stabbed! They had left her there to die, when Arnav came to rescue her.

      Re-read Chapter 1 carefully! You will understand! :)

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  23. Simply Awesome
    Just loved it
    Felt vary bad for Khushi
    Eagerly waiting for ur next update

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  25. That was really good
    hpefully she dnt break dwn aftrwrds again
    waitin fr da nxt chapter x

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  26. It was nice....but i hope the story takes it pace sooner..

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  27. awesome updt

    luv it

    summaiyasayed

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  28. awesome updt

    luv it

    summaiyasayed

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  29. poor khushi, she really needs someone strong like arnav to help her

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  30. Feeling sad for Khushi but Loved the way Arnav consoled her and made her understand things!

    Awesome Mishty!

    Waiting for the Next Part1

    Love

    Mrina

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  31. wow arnav is such a adviser

    kushigowda

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  32. part 3
    nice.........
    poor Khushi?
    who does she have now?
    cont soon..........

    Deepa (spvd)

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  33. Amazing update? I like how Arnav is advising her. Please continue soon...Thx AK

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  34. superb update! Poor Khushi! cld nt wait 4 pm! Khwaishfan (IF)

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  35. Very emotional update.. Glad that still in society there are some people like Arnav..

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  36. Very sensitive topic you have taken up here, and handles it very brilliantly! Sadly guys like Arnav are rarely there in today's world...:(...but Khushi need someone to give her courage and strength to face this...And, glad that Arnav is there for her
    nikita59 IF

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  37. It was a good chapter. I love the way Arnav made her realize that committing suicide will not solve her problem & his encouraging words was so much needed. I'm thankful that u din have Khushi being raped bcoz I hate that word by itself.

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  38. Amazing update. Felt sorry 4 khushi, but liked how arnav made her understand

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  39. superb dear:)

    mandy15

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  40. I so love this Arnav already. The way he put some sense into her was just awesome. Hope she won't think of doing stupid after this.

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  41. Amazing story...a very different story...love it..

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  42. Cheval

    Awww asr dat was the best thing to do show her reality super nice

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  43. i am so glad that arnav made her see sense

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