Saturday, 19 January 2013

Tarnished: Chapter 1



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Well this "Two Shot" is dedicated to my fabulous readers:

Mrinalini, anita_21492, ASR6262, indira priyadarsini, mandy15, fffan123, Mithila Zahid, Prasanna_dhanu, Sonia Saha, sayed summaiya, casker, anna b, DUMAS, kushigowda, snoopy84, Humayra, kamalapushpa, mitzi11, LyssaPie, india094, IPKKNDkaur92, Parvatha Varthini, Reality Truth and Arshisarunfan.


Thankyou for always commenting on each updates! Even after 

leaving IF you have blessed me with your comments. 

Thankyou!!

So, I hope you all like the update!

Don't forget to comment! :)

Love Mishty!! 


Tarnished: Chapter 1

It is said that to love was to conquer. To conquer what?

Does conquering mean controlling someone else's life?

Does conquering mean to change everything and every detail about that person. 

Was that love?

One that scarred you for life. A love that brought nothing but tears to the eyes. 

Such was the love of Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada. 

The man who she loved until now, had thought that she harbourred feelings for his brother-in-law.

Khushi felt something died within her. The tears wanted to fall, but she didn't even have energy to let them out. 

Everything was Tarnished. 

Their relationship was TARNISHED. Just like that. 

Why? 

Because the man she fell in love with, thought so low of her. The marriage that she had thought that would go somewhere, was just a sham. 

The marriage, the rasams that had once held so much value in her life was tarnished. 

It was nothing but lies. That separated her from her loved ones. 

She felt lonely. 

It seemed like Khushi Kumari Gupta had finally turned into Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada. 

The free spirit had turned into a women. But at what cost?

The innocence had been lost. 

All these thoughts were haunting Khushi's mind. She closed her eyes, and tried to forget all the pain. But it wasn't that easy. The man who she adored, hated her. The pain within her chest was growing. She wanted to scream. But it wasn't that easy. Was it?

She clutched her heart in sheer agony. The pain itself was too much to take. But was it from her heart break, or something else was difficult for her to comprehend. Suddenly she felt very light-headed and lost her balance. 

That was how Arnav had found her. 

Losing her balance and clutching her heart. 

He immediately rushed to her and gathered her in her arms. He took her to the hospital, sensing that something was amiss, by judging her facial expressions. 

The doctor soon examined her and declared it a mild heart attack. 

Arnav's face lost it's color. 

Arnav: Could it be because of what he had told her about their marriage? No it couldn't be! Could it?

Precap: Revived or not?

31 comments:

  1. yaay me first lol

    nice title

    love the prologue

    continue soon

    and rest assured I'll always be commenting :)

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    1. Ahh..thankyou! I am glad that you like it! :D

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  2. Luv the prologue....
    Poor khushi
    wait for nxt one
    precious-pie(if)

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    1. Thanks dear! But this is not an FF...

      it's just a two-shot! So there will be another part, but it will be the last part!

      Love,

      mishty

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  3. Amazing update
    So emotional
    Poor khushi...feeling bad for her
    Why always she is d victim

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    1. Ahh..glad that you like it! :D

      I don't know the answer to that...actually to be honest...I was sad...and this was a result of that! It was kind of inspired by "Her Broken Heart"!

      i hope that explains a lot! About Khushi always being the victim, that is not true...and that will show in some other updates! :D

      Love,

      mishty

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  4. hi thanks 4 da pm n awesum emotional update! Poor Khushi! well written! update soon:) Khwaishfan

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    1. Ahh, thanks!

      Glad you like it! :)

      Love,

      Mishty

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  5. Oh wow she had a mild heart attack. Poor khushi is always the one to be hurt hope she is ok

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  6. amazing updt

    poor khushi

    updt soon

    summaiyasayed

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  7. emotional start poor khushi she got a heart attack because asr broke her heart all his hate has reduced he to this emotional intense awesome start that for the mention and your work rock how can i not follow you beautiful start can't wait for more awesome thanks for the pm

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  8. Poor Khushi...I hope she is okay

    anita_21492

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  9. Oh wow what an amazing and beautiful start
    So damn good yet so shocking and sad
    LOVED IT, can't wait to read more and ty for adding my name up there

    You're an awesome writer, hence we read every story written by you :P

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  10. Amazing start
    very interesting and different story
    i feel very bad for khushi :(
    can't wait to read more continue soon please
    ASR6262

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  11. Omg this story is too interesting
    poor Khushi she had an heart attack for what Arnav said to her
    the man that che loved, heted her the most,
    being so fragile she wasn't able to bear the pain poor soul
    hope Arnav realise soon what he did was wrong, not just a mistake but a sin
    Thanks for the pm
    loved this story too too much, is superb, mind blowing and unique, plus beautifully witten keep it up

    preet (HK90 on IF)

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  12. Very emotional part but loved it.. Waiting for the second part..

    Humayra(IF)

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  13. very very emotional part was this
    superb
    poor Khushi
    got heart attack hearing what Arnav said
    want him to regret and repent so badly
    thanks for pm
    continue soon
    hope Khushi gets well soon

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  14. Thank u so much. The update is so heart- wrenching. Keep it up.

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  15. excellent start, can't wait to read more:)
    india094-if

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  16. Superb start..Loved the Update
    waiting for more..conti soon

    Ru_21(IF)

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  17. fantastic dear:)

    hope arnav regret badly.......

    mandy15

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  18. Intresting start.
    casker

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  19. part 1
    nice..........
    poor Khushi..........
    isnt she too young for this?
    cont soon dear...........

    Deepa (spvd)

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  20. Poor Khushi,

    Please continue soon.

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  21. felt bad for khushi....she got a heart attack to what arnav told??
    hope he realises that he is wrong...can we have a happy ending??
    thanks for the pm
    kamalapushpa

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  22. Very different & completely unexpected!!!

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  23. Hey!

    Written-well.

    Emotional.

    I feel for Khushi. I really do. She's been through so much in her life as it is, then Shyam, his betrayal, his filthy leering ways and now on top of that married to a man who thinks so low of you ... :(

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  24. aesum start...pooor khushi...hr heart shattered....
    ushankitvc

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  25. wow that one could never imagine
    but will she be okay
    guess will have to read the other one to find out
    is this the end
    man that was some powerful emotions there

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