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Well this "Two Shot" is dedicated to my fabulous readers:
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Love Mishty!!
Tarnished: Chapter 1
Well this "Two Shot" is dedicated to my fabulous readers:
Mrinalini, anita_21492, ASR6262, indira priyadarsini, mandy15, fffan123, Mithila Zahid, Prasanna_dhanu, Sonia Saha, sayed summaiya, casker, anna b, DUMAS, kushigowda, snoopy84, Humayra, kamalapushpa, mitzi11, LyssaPie, india094, IPKKNDkaur92, Parvatha Varthini, Reality Truth and Arshisarunfan.
Thankyou for always commenting on each updates! Even after
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Don't forget to comment! :)
Love Mishty!!
Tarnished: Chapter 1
It is said that to love was to conquer. To conquer what?
Does conquering mean controlling someone else's life?
Does conquering mean to change everything and every detail about that person.
Was that love?
One that scarred you for life. A love that brought nothing but tears to the eyes.
Such was the love of Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada.
The man who she loved until now, had thought that she harbourred feelings for his brother-in-law.
Khushi felt something died within her. The tears wanted to fall, but she didn't even have energy to let them out.
Everything was Tarnished.
Their relationship was TARNISHED. Just like that.
Why?
Because the man she fell in love with, thought so low of her. The marriage that she had thought that would go somewhere, was just a sham.
The marriage, the rasams that had once held so much value in her life was tarnished.
It was nothing but lies. That separated her from her loved ones.
She felt lonely.
It seemed like Khushi Kumari Gupta had finally turned into Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada.
The free spirit had turned into a women. But at what cost?
The innocence had been lost.
All these thoughts were haunting Khushi's mind. She closed her eyes, and tried to forget all the pain. But it wasn't that easy. The man who she adored, hated her. The pain within her chest was growing. She wanted to scream. But it wasn't that easy. Was it?
She clutched her heart in sheer agony. The pain itself was too much to take. But was it from her heart break, or something else was difficult for her to comprehend. Suddenly she felt very light-headed and lost her balance.
That was how Arnav had found her.
Losing her balance and clutching her heart.
He immediately rushed to her and gathered her in her arms. He took her to the hospital, sensing that something was amiss, by judging her facial expressions.
The doctor soon examined her and declared it a mild heart attack.
Arnav's face lost it's color.
Arnav: Could it be because of what he had told her about their marriage? No it couldn't be! Could it?
Precap: Revived or not?
Everything was Tarnished.
Their relationship was TARNISHED. Just like that.
Why?
Because the man she fell in love with, thought so low of her. The marriage that she had thought that would go somewhere, was just a sham.
The marriage, the rasams that had once held so much value in her life was tarnished.
It was nothing but lies. That separated her from her loved ones.
She felt lonely.
It seemed like Khushi Kumari Gupta had finally turned into Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada.
The free spirit had turned into a women. But at what cost?
The innocence had been lost.
All these thoughts were haunting Khushi's mind. She closed her eyes, and tried to forget all the pain. But it wasn't that easy. The man who she adored, hated her. The pain within her chest was growing. She wanted to scream. But it wasn't that easy. Was it?
She clutched her heart in sheer agony. The pain itself was too much to take. But was it from her heart break, or something else was difficult for her to comprehend. Suddenly she felt very light-headed and lost her balance.
That was how Arnav had found her.
Losing her balance and clutching her heart.
He immediately rushed to her and gathered her in her arms. He took her to the hospital, sensing that something was amiss, by judging her facial expressions.
The doctor soon examined her and declared it a mild heart attack.
Arnav's face lost it's color.
Arnav: Could it be because of what he had told her about their marriage? No it couldn't be! Could it?
Precap: Revived or not?
yaay me first lol
ReplyDeletenice title
love the prologue
continue soon
and rest assured I'll always be commenting :)
Ahh..thankyou! I am glad that you like it! :D
DeleteLuv the prologue....
ReplyDeletePoor khushi
wait for nxt one
precious-pie(if)
Thanks dear! But this is not an FF...
Deleteit's just a two-shot! So there will be another part, but it will be the last part!
Love,
mishty
Amazing update
ReplyDeleteSo emotional
Poor khushi...feeling bad for her
Why always she is d victim
Ahh..glad that you like it! :D
DeleteI don't know the answer to that...actually to be honest...I was sad...and this was a result of that! It was kind of inspired by "Her Broken Heart"!
i hope that explains a lot! About Khushi always being the victim, that is not true...and that will show in some other updates! :D
Love,
mishty
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesum emotional update! Poor Khushi! well written! update soon:) Khwaishfan
ReplyDeleteAhh, thanks!
DeleteGlad you like it! :)
Love,
Mishty
Oh wow she had a mild heart attack. Poor khushi is always the one to be hurt hope she is ok
ReplyDeleteamazing updt
ReplyDeletepoor khushi
updt soon
summaiyasayed
emotional start poor khushi she got a heart attack because asr broke her heart all his hate has reduced he to this emotional intense awesome start that for the mention and your work rock how can i not follow you beautiful start can't wait for more awesome thanks for the pm
ReplyDeletePoor Khushi...I hope she is okay
ReplyDeleteanita_21492
Oh wow what an amazing and beautiful start
ReplyDeleteSo damn good yet so shocking and sad
LOVED IT, can't wait to read more and ty for adding my name up there
You're an awesome writer, hence we read every story written by you :P
Amazing start
ReplyDeletevery interesting and different story
i feel very bad for khushi :(
can't wait to read more continue soon please
ASR6262
Omg this story is too interesting
ReplyDeletepoor Khushi she had an heart attack for what Arnav said to her
the man that che loved, heted her the most,
being so fragile she wasn't able to bear the pain poor soul
hope Arnav realise soon what he did was wrong, not just a mistake but a sin
Thanks for the pm
loved this story too too much, is superb, mind blowing and unique, plus beautifully witten keep it up
preet (HK90 on IF)
Very emotional part but loved it.. Waiting for the second part..
ReplyDeleteHumayra(IF)
very very emotional part was this
ReplyDeletesuperb
poor Khushi
got heart attack hearing what Arnav said
want him to regret and repent so badly
thanks for pm
continue soon
hope Khushi gets well soon
interesting
ReplyDeleteThank u so much. The update is so heart- wrenching. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteexcellent start, can't wait to read more:)
ReplyDeleteindia094-if
Superb start..Loved the Update
ReplyDeletewaiting for more..conti soon
Ru_21(IF)
fantastic dear:)
ReplyDeletehope arnav regret badly.......
mandy15
Intresting start.
ReplyDeletecasker
part 1
ReplyDeletenice..........
poor Khushi..........
isnt she too young for this?
cont soon dear...........
Deepa (spvd)
Poor Khushi,
ReplyDeletePlease continue soon.
felt bad for khushi....she got a heart attack to what arnav told??
ReplyDeletehope he realises that he is wrong...can we have a happy ending??
thanks for the pm
kamalapushpa
poor Khushi had a heart attack
ReplyDeleteVery different & completely unexpected!!!
ReplyDeleteHey!
ReplyDeleteWritten-well.
Emotional.
I feel for Khushi. I really do. She's been through so much in her life as it is, then Shyam, his betrayal, his filthy leering ways and now on top of that married to a man who thinks so low of you ... :(
aesum start...pooor khushi...hr heart shattered....
ReplyDeleteushankitvc
wow that one could never imagine
ReplyDeletebut will she be okay
guess will have to read the other one to find out
is this the end
man that was some powerful emotions there