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Okay as promised, I am back with the *Ahem* *Ahem* update! I hope you all like it.
But for this...I want many comments from you!
Love,
Mishty
But for this...I want many comments from you!
Love,
Mishty
Chapter 6
He started kissing her nape
from the back, when suddenly Khushi had a mischievous idea. She bent down a
little grabbed some water in her hand and threw it on Arnav and ran away.
Arnav: KHUSHI...ab tum nahi
bachogi?
He then started to run behind
her. He caught up with her and held her from the back firmly so she wasn't able
to move.
Arnav: How long are you going to run Khushi? (He bent down and grabbed some water and poured some on her neck. The
water went trickling down, wetting her saree, making her curves look even more
desirable, only for his eyes. He started to kiss her necks, nibbling it sensuously. The cold water made Khushi shiver and his touch was electrocuting
her)
Khushi: Arnav...yeh aap kya
kar rahe hain? Please leave me...
Arnav: Khushi...you are mine...and today no-one can save you Mrs. Raizada...(he said
mischievously and bit her earlobe)
Khushi: Arnav ji(she gasped)
With that he picks her up in
one swift movement and move to their little bedroom that has been decorated
with candles, making it very romantic. He put Khushi down on her feet. Arnav
slowly moved towards her and moved her hair to one side. He started taking off
the diamond necklace which was enhancing her neck. He bit off her earrings gently, giving her pleasure instead of pain.
Arnav: Khushi...N-one will come between us today! Today it's just you and me! Understood?
Khushi quickly runs to the
window facing her back to Arnav. Arnav starts walking towards her and places
his hand on her waist from back. He places his hand on the bare part of her
stomach and squeezes it gently, letting her know of his desires. Her heartbeat
was just increasing. He swiftly turns her around and bends his head a little.
Their eyes lock intensely and slows the distance between their lips start to
decrease. Khushi placed her hands around his neck while his hands were on her
waist.
Arnav placed his lips on
hers, gently sucking her on her lower lip. Khushi stood still, trying to take
the sensation in. Arnav gently bit her bottom lip, and probed his tongue inside
her mouth, to play with hers. Khushi soon started to respond to Arnav’s kiss
and the kiss turned passionate. None were willing to let go. After what seemed
like hours they, they pulled away as they were breathless. There was a red
blush forming on Khushi’s awe struck face. She hid her face in Arnav’s chest.
Arnav: Khushi...when you blush you like an angel...
Khushi: Arnav ji please...
Arnav: Nahi...Khushi...today..we have to test your strength!
Arnav then got into the naughty mode and un-clipped her saree from her shoulder and took out the pleats
from her waist. Khushi was just left with her now very revealing blouse which
made her curves look delectable, and her petti-coat. Arnav looked at Khushi and
could not stop staring at her which made Khushi turn beetroot red. She tried to
cover her-self with her hands just out of embarrassment. Arnav noticed this so
he removed his shirt so she wouldn't feel shy. He then picked her up and placed
her on the bed, which was covered with rose petals.
The smell felt heavenly. He
pressed his body on top of hers. He
buried his head in nape and started kissing her. His lips move down slowly from
her nape to her collarbone, which he bit leaving a mark to show that she is
only his. He then moved down and kissed and her shoulders and moved to her
navel.
He slightly pinched her navel
and lick around it. He sucked it and moved his tongue inside it and all she
could do was moan his name. Out of her shyness, she turned around facing her
back to his chest! Arnav started kissing her back, as it was a backless blouse,
it was only held by a knot at the back. He tugged at the knot with his mouth,
which revealed her back that he could devour. He took her blouse off and flung
it. He started kissing, licking and biting her slender back all in one go. All
this was too much for Khushi, to take so she turned around and gave him a
passionate hug and that’s all the encouragement he needed. He looked at her
form. She was wearing a silver lacy bra, which she looked divine in.
Arnav: Mrs Raizada...you are
very sexy...(Khushi just blushed immensely while Arnav smirked)
He kneaded her breasts firmly
over her bra, while Khushi was moaning. Arnav turned into the passionate lover,
although he was being very intense, he was still gentle. He knew that he had to be gentle because it
was her first time, and he wanted her to enjoy it. He slipped off her
petty-coat and he stared at her near naked form. He wanted to pounce on her but
he somehow controlled himself from the strong desire. Khushi, started to gain
courage and took his vest off. Arnav let her take control. She started to feel
his wash board chest and with her fingers, moving them up and down. She started
to kiss and bite him on his chest but when he couldn't take it anymore, he
pinned her on the bed, with her hands in one of his big palms and kissed her
sensuously.
Khushi: Arnav (she moaned)
He moved a little away from
her and unhooked her bra, he just stared at her curves, taking in her beauty.
He slowly sucked her nipples one by one, until they were rock hard, and then
got rid of his pants. He trailed kisses from her throat down to her navel and
sucked and bit her which made her scream. He went further down to kiss her
inner thigh and then bit it but licked it to sooth her pain. The magic of
tongue was doing wonders on Khushi’s senses. He moved his hands to her panties
which her wet due to her arousal.
He removed them, and placed his knee in
between her thigh and moved in a rhythm, up and down and side to side. ‘Arnav
please...’ Khushi moaned. ‘What please Khushi...what do you want?’ Arnav whispered. ‘I
want you Arnav’ and as just as she was about to release her fluids, he removed
his boxers and he replaced his knee with his manhood. He thrust-ed in her and moved
in a rhythm. He started gently but then his thrusts turned harder so he went
deeper. Initially, the pain was too much for Khushi to handle but then that
pain turned into pleasure, and she could feel her muscles contract around his.
It felt so heavenly. She was a complete woman in every sense. Soon they both
reached their climax and were trying to control their breathing, while Arnav
was still in her. He moved out of her slowly and laid beside her, he then
pulled Khushi more closer and she slept on his chest. Sleep came fast because
of the tiredness so they soon went into deep slumber.
Precap: The morning after...
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sorry I thought i edited that bit out! Obviously not! Actually...this FF is adapted from my SS on another forum...1-5 parts were different...but 6 on wards...were the mature scenes...so i only changed the names.
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