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Well, this is final update. I hope you like it and it is not too cheesy for you all. Life isn't perfect you all and people do not get everything you want. Well I hope you liked this journey.
So please show your love by your comments.
Love,
Mishty
Epilogue
It had been a few days since the funeral of Rohan. She had seen him
there. His eyes only held pain, for her. The brown orbs which always used to
give her energy to live had now lost their spark. His eyes had dark circles.
He didn't once look at her during the funeral. It was just the family,
he supported.
He was there for them. Somehow that thought was not very pleasing.
Did she want him to look at her?
Maybe –
Did she want him to support her?
Yes.
No –
Maybe.
The ETF team also came to the funeral, to give her there support. Rohan
was an integral part of her life, one that she just can’t forget. He was her
best friend, lover and husband. He was everything.
She liked Arnav, just as a friend, maybe because he saved her life,
which made her feel slightly guilty at her behavior towards him. However was
guilt enough, to just marry him?
No, it wasn't.
She knew that she had made the right decision, but why does this
decision hurt so much?
It was then that she decided that was over thinking things and just
left it. She saw him walk away from her – for the second time.
~
6 Months Later ~
She felt really tired. Her eyes were forming dark
circles. She just couldn’t sleep at night. She thought that after coming to her
parent’s house, she might forget all the tragic things that have been happening
in her life, but it was a nightmare that kept coming back. Whenever she closed
her eyes, she could only see him. His soft, brown, orbs looking at her.
His eyes were haunting her.
After the funeral, she hadn't seen him. She couldn’t
see him, because she knew that she was lying to herself when she had said that
he wasn't affecting her.
He was. One look at him now, and she would agree to
his every demand.
These 6 months had been hard. Everyone around her
was frustrating her. They were showing her their sympathy. She didn’t want sympathy;
she just wanted to behave normally. She wanted to forget about it, but the
people around her, wouldn’t let her. She had moved out of her parents place.
She needed some space, needed to be around new people, yet everything reminded
of Arnav.
For once she admitted to herself that she was wrong
about the whole thing. Right now – she was not moving on, she was exactly the
same. The only thing that changed was the location.
She needed to see him.
She loved
him. But would that betray Rohan’s love?
No it wouldn’t!
Rohan would want her to be happy, and her happiness lies within Arnav.
She needed a companion, and some people said it
right, that life is just too short, and you should spend it with someone who
you like.
She needed to go and see him.
She will go, today.
Khushi had reached AR designs. It was almost lunch
time. She didn't want to miss him. She walked up to the receptionist.
“Hello...Can you please point out Arnav Singh
Raizada’s cabin? I need to see him, it is very important!” said khushi.
“Your name, ma’am?” asked the receptionist.
“Khushi Gupta,” replied Khushi.
“You’re the Khushi! Ma’am come this way, Sir has
been expecting you!” replied the receptionist. She gave her a wide grin.
Expecting her?
Now that was unexpected. She didn't remember
informing him that she was coming to see him.
Now that was a shock.
Does that mean all this time; he knew that she
would come to him?
That he had been waiting for her to come. The
receptionist led her upstairs, into one of the private lifts, which was only
used by the staff members.
Most of the people were staring at her, probably
wondering who she was.
She was here now, but now she felt nervous.
What would she say?
Would Arnav even listen to her now?
These questions were constantly being played in her
mind. They halted just outside the cabin door, and the receptionist bid adieu,
and left.
She knocked lightly on the cabin door, hoping that
he wouldn’t hear it and then she would be forced to go back.
Arnav was reading through the file, when he heard a
faint knock. He said “come in”. He heard the door open, and someone enter.
There was silence for a few minutes, and then he
looked up.
It was her.
He didn't know what to believe, was she standing
here for real? Or was she just a fragment of his imagination. He got up and
walked up to her.
“Hi,” she said meekly, as she felt him move closer.
“Why are you here?” asked Arnav.
She could see he was tired. Tired of working or
her?
He had grown a light beard. It looked sexy.
She had always been attracted to him; he carried a
strong aura around him, which could make any woman weak in the knees, not that
she would admit that to him.
“I had a few things to say to you, that I should
have said 6 months ago, but I am saying them now!” said Khushi. He nodded his
head to tell her to carry on.
“When you said to move on, I wanted to but it wasn't easy. I was a widow and Rohan was the love of my life. I had just lost him and
in a way I would be betraying his love, if I married you.
“I walked away at that time, away from you. When I
saw you at the funeral, I saw how you helped my family yet again. You didn't have to, but you did. You didn't once look at me. I thought you might be angry,
but all I saw was pain, which I gave you. I let you walk away again.
“I tried to stay away from you, away from your
care. These six months have been very painful. I missed a friend, a lover and a
husband. There was no-one to fill that void. I couldn’t go to sleep, because
every night, I would only see you.
“I was trying to not give you Rohan’s place in my
heart, but I didn't realise that you already made space for yourself!” said
Khushi.
Arnav stared at her in shock.
Tears were pouring out her eyes. He wanted to go up
to her and kiss her senseless, but he also wanted to hear her thoughts. He wanted
to know, what was in her mind. He always knew that she would come back, but he didn't imagine it to be like this.
He had already said to his receptionist, that one
day a girl named “Khushi Gupta” would come, and at that time, she was to bring
her straight to this cabin, using the private elevator. He was pulled out of
his thoughts, when he heard her speak again.
“I can’t remove Rohan out of my mind, he was my
first love, but I will try to move on. I want to give us a chance. I want to
feel loved. I know I have given you lots of pain and you probably don’t want to
see me again...” said Khushi, but she was instantly hushed by Arnav’s hand on
her mouth.
In the next minute, she was pulled into his arms
and kissed senselessly. His lips molded over hers in an erotic dance. His arms
soothed her back, while pulling her in more deeply, so that her body was
perfectly aligned with his. His tongue danced with hers, nipping and teasing.
Her heart beat soared with this kiss. His arms moved from her back to her hips,
pulling and squeezing, eliciting sweet moans from her mouth.
It was a few minutes before their passionate kiss
had ended. She looked up dazed at him, shocked. She had never been kissed
before, never on the lips. Her eyes blinked twice to see if she was dreaming or
did that kiss really happen?
She saw a smirk on his face, and instantly knew
that it was true. She had been kissed. A soft blush decorated her face. She
looked like a fresh red rose.
He pulled her more into his arms and made her look
up at him.
“Never say that I don’t want you. I will always
want you. I told you that I would always wait for you. I love you khushi. I know
that you can’t forget Rohan. I don’t want you to, but I hope you can make some
room for me too!” said Arnav with a smile.
Who said you can’t get lucky?
He just did.
Khushi nodded her head with a smile. Arnav bent
down and kissed her head and whispered “I love you,” into her ears.
Khushi hugged him and said “I love you too!”
It was not the perfect ending, but a fresh, new
beginning for both of them.
wow awesome ending
ReplyDeletelove it dr
atlast khushi realised that she loved arnav
arnav was very confident that one day khushi will come
so he has already info his receptionist abt her
love the way khushi has told abt her feeling to arnav
n also the way arnav hush her and kiss her
aww loved the ending
ReplyDeleteshe finally realised her feeling
and aww arnav told the receptionist to let her in=]
She finally realized that she love Arnav
ReplyDeletebeautiful ending loved it
superb ending
ReplyDeletethanks sweety
Haaa... Finally done with reading the epilogue after soo much of disturbance!
ReplyDeleteI LOVED IT TO THE CORE! <3
The last kiss gave me goosebumps! :)
It was so purfect.. Just the way i imagined!
Will miss this story!
Start the others soon!
Love,
Mrina
Beautiful ending
ReplyDeleteAWWW Awesome ending.
ReplyDeleteimran78
Awesome ending. Absolutely beautiful
ReplyDeleteBeautiful ending :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome ending......
ReplyDeleteSuperb wording....
Just love it....
Thanks...
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ReplyDeleteI am soooooooo sorry I haven't been commenting
ReplyDeletejust read the remaining updates
awesome they were
awesome ending
ReplyDeletesummaiyasayed
Awesome loved it glad she took her time and sorted her self and came back beautifully ending well done
ReplyDeletewow amazing update...
ReplyDeletebeautiful end... i loved it...
from jenji08
perfect ending 4 a beautiful story....!
ReplyDeleteur stories are so realistic & hatke....!
such a sweet ending
ReplyDeletethnksss God she confessed her love.....by the way that was just awseum update.......
ReplyDeleteHi Mishty.. cool update nad good ending..thanks
ReplyDeleteAlways love an ending of arshi together. I think you potrayed her reactions aptly as no one would be ready to enter a new relationship after they just lost one and especially someone they loved so much. Rk
ReplyDeletewow!amazing.
ReplyDeleteMISTIE,IF
its perfect ending..
ReplyDeleteloved it!!!
Awesome part...... Loved it...
ReplyDeletereally beautiful ending
ReplyDeleteloved it
Glad Khushi listened to her heart eventually !!
ReplyDeletePerfect Ending !
Awesome. Glad khushi realized her feelings towards Arnav.
ReplyDeletearnav was waiting for khushi...
ReplyDeletenice
arshisarun
read all the parts in one go n its simply awesome
ReplyDeletetht was a different n unique story
the way u portrayed it was awesome
the love rajan has for priya
the amt of pain they went through khushi did not go tht mch
khushi n Arnav love
amazing
rkapoor1382 IF
wow! beautiful epilogue.....
ReplyDeletekhushi confessed her love to arnav..
arnav's wait end.....
new beginning of their life...
- Akorshi -
superb end...all ends well! Khwaishfan (IF)
ReplyDeleteJust amazing update dear
ReplyDeleteAwww that was so sweet. ...
ReplyDeleteAwww
ReplyDeleteAwesome ending
Missmk if
awsume story
ReplyDeletei read in one go
endind was superb
It was simple but really outstanding!!!!!! I loved dis ending........ Thanx
ReplyDeletesuch a beautiful epilogue.
ReplyDeletefinally my ArShi 2gether.
glad that Khushi made the brave move by admitting her feelings to Arnav.
Awesome ending..
ReplyDeleteLovely ending! Great story...
ReplyDeleteaww such a beautiful ending! Glad she realized her love for him without thinking bad about Rohan's death!
ReplyDelete- hello87_11
Superb story and beautiful ending....
ReplyDeletegeetavarma24
Loved ur ff
ReplyDeleteVery beautifully written dear
awwwwwww wht a prologue di...<3 so sweet n intense. u did proper justice to the story...loved ittttttt......<3
ReplyDeleteloads of love
pallavi (i.f)
Loved the story was quite different.
ReplyDeletehi dear thanks for sending pm
ReplyDeletei now that i have in fb but i so damm busy to just look thourgh it so sry
but thanku for sending
these story is very very touching and i wished that girl should have also get a chance but life is bitter but we need be strong
Thanku for posting such a wonderful and a story where we should think and feel :D
IF gilmore
wonderful story...
ReplyDeletejust read all the updates...
thank you....
beautiful ending pleased that she gave their love a chance
ReplyDeletehi mishty, read all 11 parts and epilogue in one go awesome loved it.
ReplyDeleteso intense, romance, pain and ended with passion and true love,
thanks for this wonderful fiction
sorry for the late reply (still catching up with coerced allince early chapters, will comment there once for all)
(IF user laksh65)
I love how she took her time
ReplyDeleteAnd beautiful ending
..Anita.. (IF)
Awwww dat was a perfect n beautiful ending.....
ReplyDeletetxx 4 pm..
epilogue
ReplyDeleteawesome...........
Deepa (spvd)
awww finally after thinking about it and having some time to herself she realised that she wanted Arnav and he did too!
ReplyDeleteNice epilogue
that was really a fitting move on in life....the wilted rose again bloomed to be a fresh rose. :)
ReplyDeletesuch a lovely story......thanx
amus5(IF)
fabulous story dear:)
ReplyDeleteloved all parts:)
mandy15
what a wonderful story....love always win
ReplyDeleteRead it in one go....Beautifully written!!!
ReplyDeleteGoing to read all your work...:)
Hi Mishti
ReplyDeleteJust read Wilted Rose from the start in a go......loved it a lot......thank u for sharing this link with me.....catching up with each of ur works one by one.....
Read the entire SS in one go.
ReplyDeleteSimply wonderfully written.
You made me cry.
Thank you for writing this story.
Gifttag (IF)
I just loved it to the core!!!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful ending…
I dont know what to say after the story .....it has left me speechless except that it was beautiful...amazing..
ReplyDeleteI dont know what to say after the story .....it has left me speechless except that it was beautiful...amazing..
ReplyDeleteLovely ending. Arnav knew she was going to go back to him. Really liked khushis confession. Very honest.
ReplyDeletesakhter90 (IF)
cheval
ReplyDeleteperfect ending dear
all i can say dear is that u r a wonderful writer i soo love ur works i started reading yesterday itz the second i finished now
i ll continue tonyt :D thanks dear for giving me this opportunity to read :)
tc
aww such a cute ending
ReplyDeletei loved how she took her own time to realize what she wants
that was such a sweet n cute ending...
ReplyDeleteloved it alot..
thnx for the pm...
anumeha -IF
perfect ending.
ReplyDeleteHeyyy..... Great work!! I loved ur ss!! It was amazing though a lil sad in the beginin but yup it gradually bcame intrestin....... I respect ur thoughtfulness bout the delhi gang rape!!! N probably mayb a few victims who might read this story wud b inspired n try to move on.... Great work!! (Y)
ReplyDeleteCmin back to the ss i actually got scred tat it was arnav who died but then lit up to knw tat it was some1 else.... Hahaha..... :))))
I actually dint understand y was this story a "mature content" until the last kiss!!! Hmmmm, quite sexy i must say!! ;)
Awee loved d story :-) <3
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