A FF collaboration between myself (Mishty Shah) and Mrinalini!
I will be updating on blog, while a thread has been opened on IF as well.
Please shower us with your love!
Writer's Comments
Well, we have just started. We hope you like the concept. This concept was given to me by a dear friend "Annie Anshra". So thank you my dear friend. I hope we do justice to your story!
Love,
~ Mishty and Mrinalini ~
Prologue
Arnav Singh Raizada stepped out of the limousine, with his two bodyguards. He was a dark, handsome man. Dominance oozed out of his body. He was dressed in a crisp, black suit. Every girl wanted to stand next to him, just so it could flourish their careers. His face revealed nothing as he strode into his mansion.
He had just won the title of being “The Best Business Man of 2013”. It was something to be proud of. The party was held at his farmhouse to honour this success. He didn’t spare a glance at anyone. The party had already started, but ASR was known to attend parties late.
The minute he entered, there was silence in the hall, and everyone began to clap with joy. He made a short speech, of thanking each and everyone to attend this party and for congratulating him on his success. Glasses were raised and toasts were made.
As soon as that was finished, he swiftly walked to the bar to join his best friends. Rickesh and Vicky looked up when he arrived and gave him a hug.
“Congratulations, my friend. You deserve it,” said Rickesh.
“Yes congrats. Now since you are finally here, let’s get this party started!” said Vicky.
“Thanks, it’s good to be back. AR designs is now internationally the best!” said Arnav.
“Yes, all to your hard work!” said Rickesh.
Rickesh and Vicky ushered the waiter to arrange some shots. Arnav looked at them and was nodding no, but Rickesh held him and made him down a shot.
Then another one.
Then a third.
Then a fourth.
Fifth.
Sixth.
By the sixth shot, Arnav was totally gone. He was smashed. Vicky and Rickesh helped him outside, into the garden, by the sycamore tree. It was there spot. They always used to hang out side by this tree. They had also bought some drinks with them outside. Suddenly the garden lights were switched off. It was too dark. They couldn’t even see each other’s faces, someone must have accidentally switched off the lights.
They sat him down, by the tree.
“Now the real celebration starts!” said Vicky.
Soon Rickesh and Vicky were also heavily drunk due to the strong bourbon spirits. They nudged Arnav by the tree. He was looking at them.
“I like your secretary, she’s hot!” said Rickesh.
“Yeah – how come you haven’t bedded her yet? If you won’t, I will!” said Vicky.
“She’s just after the money and the status – like all the other bitches!” spat out Arnav.
“What you need to do, is to have some sex with a stranger!” suggested Rickesh.
“Yeah – dude. That is perfect. You can do it tonight as well. It’s the celebration night – you deserve some relief!” said Vicky.
“No, you pricks. I can’t just have some sex with a stranger!” shouted Arnav, opening another bottle to drink.
“I dare you – Arnav Singh Raizada to have sex with a stranger! Come on, be a man! We will go inside, and send you a nice girl to enjoy! You wait here!” said Rickesh.
“Yeah, we will get a line of girls, they aren’t gonna refuse some hot mid-night sex with you!” said Vicky.
Before, Arnav could utter a syllable, they were gone. Arnav carried on drinking, thinking that they will send someone.
is khushi going to end up theree?
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very interesting story can't wait to read more
ReplyDeletecongratulation on new story and all the best
continue soon please and thank you for pm me
Very interesting... lets see how the story will unfold
ReplyDeleteInteresting start! How often will you be Updating? Keep up the great work!
ReplyDelete-CB
Interesting..
ReplyDeleteIs some how Khushi is gonna end up there?
Looking forward to read more of this story !!
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ReplyDeletesummaiyasayed
interesting
ReplyDeleteInteresting starts...jst super...
ReplyDeleteAwesome concept hope he is not going to force him self on khushi thinking she is the girl they sent congrats on the new ff
ReplyDeletewow interesting start......
ReplyDeletewaiting to read next part.....
from jenji08
interesting buddy can,t wait to read more update soon
ReplyDeletewow thats a captivating start...
ReplyDeletejust a guess... he is expecting someone... Khushi ends up there by coincidence... he mistakes her to be that someone sent by his friends,,,, remaining as the title suggests...
Interesting n different concept...
ReplyDeleteLove to read further....
Pls continue soon...
I think khushi will come there by accidentally...
Waiting for part one...
Thanks..
nice beginning
ReplyDeletebut dangerous game
omg love it plz update soon
ReplyDeleteloved it.. wowwww its just superb
ReplyDeleteand thanks for the credit
but u urself is going a great job
waiting for more
congratulations new FF.....interesting start...waiting for update :)
ReplyDeleteUh oh hope Khushi does not get tangled in this. Great start looking forward to the rest of the story. Rk
ReplyDeleteinteresting.
ReplyDeleteMISTIE,IF
interesting prologue... waiting for the story to proceed...
ReplyDeletehi interesting ,bad boy ,what to say we all like dark and handsome(bad)boys.continue soon
ReplyDeleteInteresting concept... Would Khushi end up with the drunk Arnav....looking forward to see whats in store - RealityTruth ( IF User )
ReplyDeleteinteresting concept
ReplyDeletewaiting 4 the story to star
Congrats onthe new story mishty.
ReplyDeleteSound interesting,looking forward for the next chapter.
imran78
New story can't wait
ReplyDeleteinteresting start dear...
ReplyDeletedo update soon...
-priya.1-
nice start mishty...way to go dear
ReplyDeletei think khushi accidentally end up there n arnav think she is the gal sent by his friends which is nt true
ReplyDeletearshisarun
superb prologue! well written..congrats on teh new story! update soon! do try n pm! Khwaishfan (IF)
ReplyDeleteinteresting
ReplyDeleteCongratulations for new FF dear interesting continue soon
ReplyDeleteinteresting concept
ReplyDeletei have a feeling.....Khushi is going to be that girl :D
GunM
Interesting can't wait to read more
ReplyDeleteMissmk if
Very interesting part...
ReplyDeleteSound interesting waiting to read more.
ReplyDeleteIs Khushi going to be the one????
Hope Arnav will not do something bad to her.
interesting prologue dr
ReplyDeletelove it
"Arnav Singh Raizada stepped out of the limousine, with his two bodyguards. He was a dark, handsome man. Dominance oozed out of his body. He was dressed in a crisp, black suit."
oh this line will be coming true for me actually to see it
as here in mauritius on next thursday they are going to telecast IPKKND on tv
oh just eagerly waiting for it to watch
Nice & different concept..
ReplyDeleteIt was a brilliant start..
Looking forward to more of this story..
Nice & different concept..
ReplyDeleteIt was a brilliant start..
Looking forward to more of this story..
Nice & different concept..
ReplyDeleteIt was a brilliant start..
Looking forward to more of this story..
Interesting start.. Definitely khushi is coming.. But why she?? It's really a suspense... I'm looking forward to read this interesting, suspensed story..
ReplyDeleteooooo interesting!
ReplyDeleteSo Arnav will be having a night a celebration tonight for defo!
Interesting! I'm curious now :-) can't wait for the next chapter! :D
ReplyDeletecontinue soon very interesting story
ReplyDeleteQUITE INTERESTING! (IF:Arshisarunfan)
ReplyDeleteinteresting story...
ReplyDeletethank you dear....
great start
ReplyDeletecongrats
ReplyDeleteprologue
nice.............
Deepa (spvd)
love the start
ReplyDeleteand sorry for the late comment
india094-if
superb dear:)
ReplyDeletemandy15
sorry for the late comment...i could not visit your blog....interesting story
ReplyDeletefab start
ReplyDeleteashw99 (IF)
ReplyDeletewow this is interesting...
Very nice concept, why i feel khushi will end up there.
superb.
Interesting prologue.
ReplyDeletesakhter90 (IF)
interesting...
ReplyDeletecont. soon..
anumeha -IF
Interesting nice start
ReplyDeleteInteresting nice start
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