Wednesday, 27 March 2013

Branded: Prologue




A FF collaboration between myself (Mishty Shah) and Mrinalini!

I will be updating on blog, while a thread has been opened on IF as well. 

Please shower us with your love!


Writer's Comments
Well, we have just started. We hope you like the concept. This concept was given to me by a dear friend "Annie Anshra". So thank you my dear friend. I hope we do justice to your story!

Love,

~ Mishty and Mrinalini ~


Prologue

It was a dark night. The wind was howling while the trees were swaying in the silver moon light. It was the night of the bring celebration. In the outskirts of Delhi, a black limousine lined up in front of the Raizada Farmhouse. The door opened to reveal a handsome man. The press was cooing with excitement. Reporters were trying to get as near as possible.

Arnav Singh Raizada stepped out of the limousine, with his two bodyguards. He was a dark, handsome man. Dominance oozed out of his body. He was dressed in a crisp, black suit. Every girl wanted to stand next to him, just so it could flourish their careers. His face revealed nothing as he strode into his mansion.

He had just won the title of being “The Best Business Man of 2013”. It was something to be proud of. The party was held at his farmhouse to honour this success. He didn’t spare a glance at anyone. The party had already started, but ASR was known to attend parties late.

The minute he entered, there was silence in the hall, and everyone began to clap with joy. He made a short speech, of thanking each and everyone to attend this party and for congratulating him on his success. Glasses were raised and toasts were made.

As soon as that was finished, he swiftly walked to the bar to join his best friends. Rickesh and Vicky looked up when he arrived and gave him a hug.

“Congratulations, my friend. You deserve it,” said Rickesh.

“Yes congrats. Now since you are finally here, let’s get this party started!” said Vicky.

“Thanks, it’s good to be back. AR designs is now internationally the best!” said Arnav.

“Yes, all to your hard work!” said Rickesh.

Rickesh and Vicky ushered the waiter to arrange some shots. Arnav looked at them and was nodding no, but Rickesh held him and made him down a shot.

Then another one.

Then a third.

Then a fourth.

Fifth.

Sixth.

By the sixth shot, Arnav was totally gone. He was smashed. Vicky and Rickesh helped him outside, into the garden, by the sycamore tree. It was there spot. They always used to hang out side by this tree. They had also bought some drinks with them outside. Suddenly the garden lights were switched off. It was too dark. They couldn’t even see each other’s faces, someone must have accidentally switched off the lights.

They sat him down, by the tree.

“Now the real celebration starts!” said Vicky.

Soon Rickesh and Vicky were also heavily drunk due to the strong bourbon spirits. They nudged Arnav by the tree. He was looking at them.

“I like your secretary, she’s hot!” said Rickesh.

“Yeah – how come you haven’t bedded her yet? If you won’t, I will!” said Vicky.

“She’s just after the money and the status – like all the other bitches!” spat out Arnav.

“What you need to do, is to have some sex with a stranger!” suggested Rickesh.

“Yeah – dude. That is perfect. You can do it tonight as well. It’s the celebration night – you deserve some relief!” said Vicky.

“No, you pricks. I can’t just have some sex with a stranger!” shouted Arnav, opening another bottle to drink.

“I dare you – Arnav Singh Raizada to have sex with a stranger! Come on, be a man! We will go inside, and send you a nice girl to enjoy! You wait here!” said Rickesh.

“Yeah, we will get a line of girls, they aren’t gonna refuse some hot mid-night sex with you!” said Vicky.

Before, Arnav could utter a syllable, they were gone. Arnav carried on drinking, thinking that they will send someone.




58 comments:

  1. is khushi going to end up theree?
    cant wait to read the story=]

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  2. very interesting story can't wait to read more
    congratulation on new story and all the best
    continue soon please and thank you for pm me

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  3. Very interesting... lets see how the story will unfold

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  4. Interesting start! How often will you be Updating? Keep up the great work!
    -CB

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  5. Interesting..
    Is some how Khushi is gonna end up there?

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  6. Looking forward to read more of this story !!

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  8. waiting for updt

    summaiyasayed

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  9. Interesting starts...jst super...

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  10. Awesome concept hope he is not going to force him self on khushi thinking she is the girl they sent congrats on the new ff

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  11. wow interesting start......
    waiting to read next part.....

    from jenji08

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  12. interesting buddy can,t wait to read more update soon

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  13. wow thats a captivating start...
    just a guess... he is expecting someone... Khushi ends up there by coincidence... he mistakes her to be that someone sent by his friends,,,, remaining as the title suggests...

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  14. Interesting n different concept...
    Love to read further....
    Pls continue soon...
    I think khushi will come there by accidentally...
    Waiting for part one...
    Thanks..

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  15. nice beginning
    but dangerous game

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  16. omg love it plz update soon

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  17. loved it.. wowwww its just superb
    and thanks for the credit
    but u urself is going a great job
    waiting for more

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  18. congratulations new FF.....interesting start...waiting for update :)

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  19. Uh oh hope Khushi does not get tangled in this. Great start looking forward to the rest of the story. Rk

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  20. interesting.
    MISTIE,IF

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  21. interesting prologue... waiting for the story to proceed...

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  22. hi interesting ,bad boy ,what to say we all like dark and handsome(bad)boys.continue soon

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  23. Interesting concept... Would Khushi end up with the drunk Arnav....looking forward to see whats in store - RealityTruth ( IF User )

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  24. interesting concept

    waiting 4 the story to star

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  25. Congrats onthe new story mishty.
    Sound interesting,looking forward for the next chapter.
    imran78

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  26. interesting start dear...
    do update soon...
    -priya.1-

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  27. nice start mishty...way to go dear



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  28. i think khushi accidentally end up there n arnav think she is the gal sent by his friends which is nt true

    arshisarun

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  29. superb prologue! well written..congrats on teh new story! update soon! do try n pm! Khwaishfan (IF)

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  30. Congratulations for new FF dear interesting continue soon

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  31. interesting concept
    i have a feeling.....Khushi is going to be that girl :D

    GunM

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  32. Interesting can't wait to read more
    Missmk if

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  33. Sound interesting waiting to read more.
    Is Khushi going to be the one????
    Hope Arnav will not do something bad to her.

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  34. interesting prologue dr
    love it
    "Arnav Singh Raizada stepped out of the limousine, with his two bodyguards. He was a dark, handsome man. Dominance oozed out of his body. He was dressed in a crisp, black suit."
    oh this line will be coming true for me actually to see it
    as here in mauritius on next thursday they are going to telecast IPKKND on tv
    oh just eagerly waiting for it to watch

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  35. Nice & different concept..
    It was a brilliant start..
    Looking forward to more of this story..

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  36. Nice & different concept..
    It was a brilliant start..
    Looking forward to more of this story..

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  37. Nice & different concept..
    It was a brilliant start..
    Looking forward to more of this story..

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  38. Interesting start.. Definitely khushi is coming.. But why she?? It's really a suspense... I'm looking forward to read this interesting, suspensed story..

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  39. ooooo interesting!
    So Arnav will be having a night a celebration tonight for defo!

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  40. Interesting! I'm curious now :-) can't wait for the next chapter! :D

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  41. continue soon very interesting story

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  42. QUITE INTERESTING! (IF:Arshisarunfan)

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  43. interesting story...
    thank you dear....

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  44. congrats

    prologue
    nice.............

    Deepa (spvd)

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  45. love the start
    and sorry for the late comment
    india094-if

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  46. superb dear:)

    mandy15

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  47. sorry for the late comment...i could not visit your blog....interesting story

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  48. ashw99 (IF)

    wow this is interesting...
    Very nice concept, why i feel khushi will end up there.
    superb.

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  49. Interesting prologue.

    sakhter90 (IF)

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  50. interesting...
    cont. soon..
    anumeha -IF

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