Saturday, 30 March 2013

Branded: Chapter 1





A FF collaboration between myself (Mishty Shah) and Mrinalini!

I will be updating on blog, while a thread has been opened on IF as well. 

Please shower us with your love!


Writer's Comments
Thank you for the overwhelming response and such appreciative comments!Please keep them coming! It encourages us to write better!

Well this was a very tough chapter to write. It displays dark emotions. We hope you like it. It's a different concept and we are trying something new, for the first time.

~ Love Mishty & Mrinalini ~


Chapter 1


Before, Arnav could utter a syllable, they were gone. Arnav carried on drinking, thinking that they will send someone.

Rickesh and Vicky walked into the mansion and went to Arnav’s room and fell on the bed. They soon drifted into deep slumber forgetting that they were to send a girl to Arnav. Arnav kept waiting and continued to drink.

Inside the mansion a pretty girl was loitering around with a champagne tulip in her hand.

“Why the hell does Dad have to bring me to these boring business parties?” she thought to herself when suddenly a voice broke her chain of thoughts, “KHUSHI!” She turned around and saw her father.

“Yeah Dad!” she replied in a bored tone.

“I know you’re bored beta, but I don’t like leaving you alone at home! Go and get some fresh air, make some friends. We’ll leave in a while,” said Mr. Gupta.

Khushi nodded and walked out of the mansion. The cool breeze was caressing her soft skin. She wrapped her arms around herself and walked to the garden which was spread over acres. It was too dark to see anything clearly. The lights in the garden were turned off. Suddenly she tripped over something and fell. She expected to fall on the grass but she fell on something hard. Her hands roamed all over the hard surface. She realized it was cloth.

“Huh?” she said in shock when suddenly a pair of arms wrapped around her petite waist.

“So missy, you’re finally here! I have been waiting for someone for a long time now!” said the husky voice. Due to the closeness, Khushi could only smell alcohol in the man’s breath. She tried to push away and get up when the pair of arms tightened their grip on his waist. She tried to see his face, but she couldn’t in the sheer darkness.

“Not so soon darling! I haven’t finished with you yet,” the man whispered huskily and pulled her more into him and placed a wet kiss on the crook of her neck. Khushi shivered with his touch.

“Leave me!” she shouted.

“Ahaan..I will darling but not before our midnight fun is over honey!”, he said cheekily. With this, he brushed his lips onto hers and bit her lower lip.

“Aah! Leave me!” she cried in pain. Arnav on the other hand was in no mood to listen to her. Her perfume was creating havoc in him. He deepened the kiss and nibbled on her lips. Her hand kept pushing him and trying to get up. The man got irritated and rolled over and got himself on top of her. He forced his tongue into her mouth and kissed her senselessly tasting every corner of her mouth.

The man was too heavy for Khushi to push off, but she couldn’t give in. Her eyes welled up with tears. The man went down to her swan like neck and kissed and nipped her soft milky skin. She held his hair and pulled it trying to hurt him which was in turn turning him on.

He slipped the strap of the dress and bit her shoulder. His hand travelled from her petite waist all the way up to her bosom.

Khushi gritted her teeth and pushed him off and got up. Before she could regain balance, she was pulled back on top of him. His hand pressed her soft bosom. The pair of hands soon travelled to her hip. She felt his hand on her derriere, a lone tear dropped out of her welled up eyes.

Before she knew it, the pair of hand reached the bottom of the dress and pulled it over her and the dress was thrown away. She was lying in her inner wear on a drunken stranger with his hands all over her semi naked body. She gritted her teeth in anger and pain and clutched her fists.

The hard pair of hands then made their way to her bare back and clipped open her bra and threw it away. She was rolled over by him as he feasted on her bosom, kissing and sucking it.

“Please leave me!” she cried out a whisper.

The man continued massaging her bosom. He pushed his manhood against her softness. Her eyes opened in shock as her mind registered his hardness rubbing over her femininity. His lips travelled down, trailing wet kisses all of her stomach. She could feel his teeth biting the waistband of her panty.

“Please don’t!” she cried out. The man slipped out her panty and parted her legs. He kissed her inner thighs and nipped the soft skin of her thighs. She felt his lips on her womanhood. He tickled and stimulated her arousal. She tried to push him off, while hissing in disgust. His tongue rolled in erotic pleasure, eliciting an unwanted moan from her thoroughly kissed lips.

“You taste like heaven!” said the man huskily.

Khushi clutched her fists hard. The man kept nibbling on her womanhood and came back up and kissed her bosom. Suddenly it all stopped. She could feel the man lie on her bosom. She pushed him aside and got up. She searched for her clothes and put them on quickly and ran away from that place.

She ran for her life. She was crying in pain, anger and disgust. She couldn’t wait for her father so she ran on the dark, empty and isolated streets of Delhi. She ran as if she were saving her life.

She reached her home and opened the door with shivering hands. She fled up the stairs to her room. She entered her room and banged the door behind her. She locked it and ran to the bathroom. She stripped herself making her dress pool around her feet. She stepped out and examined her body in the mirror with tears still brimming in her eyes.

Her hand went back and clipped open her bra. All she could see were red marks all over her body. She removed her panty and looked at herself in disgust.

“Why me?” she shouted in anger. She switched on the hot shower and stood under it letting all the touches of that stranger wash off her body.

She wiped her body with the towel and wrapped herself. She walked out and changed into her night suit.

Tears trickled down her welled up eyes and before she could stop them, the thoughts of that man haunted her and she began to cry. She sobbed with her mind full of questions as to why it happened to her. Who was the man, who did this to her?

“I will teach that man a lesson if I ever find out who he was!” she said gaining some confidence. She continued, “This was not my mistake! I’m not at fault”, she told herself and fell on her bed with dried tears marking her cheeks and the haunted memories of the night in her mind.

All she could do is regain her confidence and start a fresh next morning.



61 comments:

  1. awesome update dr

    love the update dr

    but feeling bad for her

    dont knw will she be able to knw that its was arnav who did this to her

    and will arnay be able to remember khushi

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  2. Oh gosh, what a thing to experience for Khushi. Good thing he was not able to go all the way as I don't think he would be able to live with it once he will be in his senses. Rk

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  3. Poor girl.... But will Arnav remember all these? And Khushi has not yet seen him na? Great update
    update soon

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  4. Really good start
    Update soon x

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  5. Dont know.. how will they react wen they will know who was the person.. will arnav remember anything..??
    Feeling reaaly bad for khushi... wondering what trauma she went through when her body was being used by a stranger...

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  6. thnx to god He didnt actully rape her
    its so intersting plz update soon

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  7. Interesting update. What a tragedy it was for Khushi. Now will Arnav realize his mistake. Poor Khushi wonder how she is going to find out who is the guy???

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  8. amazing update

    loved it

    thank god that he fainted before do any thing

    poor khushi really feel bad 4 her

    thnxxx 4 pm

    waiting 4 next update

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  9. thank god nothing serious(ful mid night fun)dint happen

    arshisarun

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  10. How will Khushi know that Arnav did this to her? [IF:Arshisarunfan]

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  11. omg,poor khusi.
    MISTIE,IF

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  12. Oh god! feels very bad for Khushi but thank god Arnav didn't go further and Khushi is very strong girl.

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  13. Amazing update!!! I feel terrible for Kushi to have had to go through something like this, but am glad Arnav was not able to go all th way. Look forward to reading the next chapter. I wonder if Arnav will recall anything in his drunken behavior. Maybe Kushi left something behind. Thanks. AK

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  14. Woooow great update. ... poor khushi..

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  15. Oh No!!! total MU

    Arnav thought she was sent to him

    And poor Khushi did not know him, So hurt for her

    Oh Lord problems

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  16. Poor Khushi glad arnav didnt go through with it

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  17. feeling bad for khushi thanks for the link

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  18. interesting start feeling bad for khushi n thanks for sharing ur blog link
    faree

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  19. asr thought she was sent for him and in his drunken state he did not realized she was fight him poor khushi glad asr passed out he almost raped he hope she teaches him a good lesson thanks for the pm awesome update

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  20. amazing update dear please update soon.

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  21. i feel sorry for khushi but arnav fainted ,i know he is going to regret when know what he did to khushi.drinking is bad ,too much drink too bad

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  22. So Arnav thought Khushi to be the one sent by his friends and almost raped her..I guess they both don't know who the stranger was.. and Arnav would repent when he gets to know that his friends didn't send anyone to him to spend a night with him..Would Khushi not able to forget this dark past, and hesitate any touches from Arnav, without each of them knowing that he was responsible for her past....Looking forward to see how you are going to unravel this mystery.. ---- Reality Truth ( IF User )

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  23. Poor Khushi, glad that Arnav had dozed off.. Arnav was drunk. So, will he remember anything??

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  24. Awesome update...
    I think arnav will not remember anything as he was drunk....
    Poor khushi...
    Waiting for next part...

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  26. Nice update
    But felt bad for Khushi
    Was it Arnav who did that to Khushi???
    Thanks for the update

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  27. Arnav molested khushi in a drunken state !!! Thats pathetic !! :(
    But i doubt he will remember anything and how will this affect Khushi ???
    Not done Arnav..not done at all !

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  28. Nice update....

    geetavarma24

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  29. he nearly raped her n I bet he won't remember....
    plz do update soon
    march2011 if

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  30. superb updt

    luvd it

    summaiyasayed

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  31. OMG poor Khushi
    Wonder if she finds out it was arnav

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  32. Feeling bad for Khushi

    was it Arnav? thinking the girl was send by his friends.


    And if he was not dozed off than ....


    Now wonder how Khushi is going to find Arnav and takes her revenge.


    Great update.


    Imran Khan

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  33. Thank goodness he lost his consciousness before ruining her forever... even now I hope Khushi is strong enough...
    I really want Arnav to remember....

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  34. awesome update
    missmk if

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  35. Amazing update! poor khushi!!I hope she does teach him a lesson and he deeply regrets it!
    ~hello87_11

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  36. aww ....dats was awseum....poor khushi! dunt noe in future wht will happen ....

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  37. Oh my god arnav how can u do that

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  38. Oops I hope arnav will nt 4get wt he did :@
    Lil scared 4 wt happen nxt :-o

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  39. part 1
    nice............
    poor Khushi..........
    cont soon..................
    Deepa (spvd)

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  40. nice update...
    india094-if

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  41. Oh man what did Arnav do? Poor Khushi? Where did Arnavs stupid friends go? Looking forward for next chapter!

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  42. nice update. but poor khushi!! feel so bad for her. hope she teaches him a lesson!

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  43. nice update awww poor khushi bt it was nt arnav's fault in a way too
    IF user dishashah4176

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  45. The start is awesome...
    Poor khushi!
    Feeling sad for her condition..
    Lets see where this misunderstanding leads them..

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  46. The start is awesome...
    Poor khushi!
    Feeling sad for her condition..
    Lets see where this misunderstanding leads them..

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  47. Nice start, waiting for Khushi and Arnav's encounter next, she has not seen him, and does not remember...., nice...

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  48. that was an amazing start.....omg such things do happen......khushi, u r strong pls don't become weak over what happened ....yes u r not at fault.....

    pls continue soon

    amus5

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  49. fantastic update dear:)

    mandy15

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  50. Nice update.....
    Poor Khushi..... Feelng sad 4 her....
    Bt Arnav was not in his senses.....

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  51. Wow amazing start for a new story!!
    Just found your blog and I just finished reading ur finished works n started with this new one :)
    Your stories are one heck of a roller coaster ride!! Loving them a lot :)
    Update soon!!!

    My IF name is NEHAARSHI

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  52. poor khushi was at the wrong place at the wrong time.....arnav ws so drunk he did not know what he ws doing....continue sooon....
    ushankitvc

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  53. Nice FF.
    casker

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  54. will they recognised each others when they meet again....

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  55. great update
    poor khushi feel sorry for her
    but she has regained some determination which is great

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  56. ashw99 (IF)

    woah, that was fearful...
    Though he didn't actually make out with her but still it was pretty much for her.
    Nice update.

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  57. Very nice one dear!!!! An awesome start….
    But I feel sorry for Khushi…
    Hope she will find out the guy soon
    Loved it

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  58. Poor khushi! Arnav was so drunk ! I doubt he will remember anything!

    sakhter90 (IF)

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  59. Very interesting!!

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