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Well, I am back with another chapter. Most people wanted to know more about Arnav. Well here it is! I hope you like it!
Love you all,
Mishty
Chapter 8
The ETF members had left them. Arnav came to Khushi’s side and
sat beside her. He held her arm and whispered sweet nothings into her ear. She
found his presence calming. It helped her forget the events of the past few
days for a few seconds and relax.
He had helped her a lot, when he didn’t even know her. That was
one shocking thought. He knew so much about her, but she didn’t know anything
about him. She looked up at him frowning.
“Is something wrong?” he asked.
“I don’t know anything about you!” said Khushi.
“What do you want to know?” asked Arnav feeling amused.
“Anything and Everything!” said Khushi happily.
“Okay, well – like I told you, my full name is Arnav Singh
Raizada. I work at AR,” said Arnav. He was about to say something but got
interrupted by Khushi.
“AR?” repeated Khushi.
“What you have never heard of it?” asked Arnav, slightly miffed
at that thought.
“I have heard it somewhere, oh yeah! My best friend Lavanya
works at AR, but she has that her boss was really mean. He shouts all the time,
and fires anyone if they make a small mistake. She said he was a rakshas but
apparently he is really good looking. All the models want to date him. So what
do you think? Is he really that mean? I mean you work under him right?” said
Khushi, not knowing that Lavanya’s boss is sitting right in front of her.
Arnav felt anger course through him, when Khushi mentioned that
he was a ‘Rakshas’. He felt like ripping Lavanya’s head off. He normally didn't get angry that often, but his office staff were useless. He was a genuinely
calm, composed person, but in business he had learned to be ruthless. You have
to be ruthless, if you want to succeed.
He had wanted to succeed. He had that drive in him. He had seen
the world. It was too cruel. In order to survive in this world, you had to have
power. That was one of his first lessons in life. He looked at the innocent
Khushi, in front of him.
“Khushi, I am Lavanya’s boss!” said Arnav finally. Khushi gasped
in shock.
“What?” shouted Khushi, “You told me that you work at AR!”
“Actually, I was going to tell you that I am the owner of AR but you
interrupted me!” said Arnav.
“Oh my God, I am so Sorry. I didn't know. Please don’t fire
Lavanya. It is not her fault. Plus, now come to think of it, you aren't like
that at all. You are kind, caring and friendly,” said Khushi.
Arnav looked at her in surprise. No-one had called friendly
before. If his sister found out, she would be shocked, he smirked at that.
“Okay so who is in your family?” asked Khushi.
“I have my sister; her name is Anjali. Then there is my Nani,
Mami and my Mama and then my brother, Akash,” said Arnav.
“What about your parents?” asked Khushi. When Khushi had asked
that question, she saw a flicker of emotion in his eyes, but then darkness
covered it in the space of a second. She wanted to ask; what was wrong but then
he replied.
“They are dead!” he said in a low voice.
“Oh I am Sorry. I didn't mean to..” stammered Khushi.
“It’s okay!” said Arnav. Khushi could see that he wasn't okay.
“My father had a mistress and my mom soon found out. She
couldn’t take the pressure, so she killed herself in front of me. She jumped
off the terrace. I couldn’t save her. When my dad found out, he killed himself
too because he couldn’t take the guilt. He was filled with regret!” said Arnav.
“You know Khushi; we must all suffer from one of two things, the
pain of love or the pain of regret. My mum felt pain because of her love while
my dad felt pain because of regret!” said Arnav.
“That’s why, when I heard you talking about suicide, I couldn’t take
it, because I know how it feels,” said Arnav. Arnav’s eyes were filled with
tears. Khushi took her hand and rubbed his tears away, but more kept pouring
out. She then brought her lips and kissed his tears away. She nodded her head,
telling him silently to stop crying.
“I am sorry for asking you about this,” Khushi uttered with
tears in her eyes. She didn’t know that this man was carrying so much sorrow
with him. He knew what this type of pain was.
The pain of losing someone.
The pain of being hurt.
Khushi hugged him. He was hurt in the past. She was being hurt
in the present. They were two people in the same boat, sailing together in no-man’s
land. She rubbed her back.
“Promise me, that even after this case finishes, we will still
be in touch! Promise me that!” said Khushi.
“I promise!” said Arnav. In a few days, they become relatively
close. They had learnt to depend on each other. They didn't know where life
would take them. They were just living in the present, not worried about what
the future holds.
They soon sat apart, when they felt a knock on the door.
The doctor stared at the duo and gave them one of his rare
smiles.
“Khushi, I have been given orders by ETF to discharge you.
Personally, I have would have kept you for another day, but you have made a
vast improvement since yesterday, so I do not mind discharging you early. When
I did the checks this morning, everything was normal. However, you stood still
take care of yourself. I have also been told that to tell you that both of you
are required in the ETF office in an hour’s time,” said the doctor.
“Thank you doctor, for everything!” said Khushi.
“You’re welcome. Now no more suicidal thoughts!” said the doctor
with a smile. Khushi nodded.
“Doctor what about the treatment cost?” asked Khushi.
“Oh don’t worry about that, I have sorted it out,” said Arnav.
“What? Arnav I can sort it out trust me!” said Khushi.
“Khushi, don’t worry about that,” said Arnav. Khushi nodded.
“Alright then, I hope I never see you two again!” said the
doctor with a smile. Then the doctor left.
The nurse came in then.
“Khushi, we need to get you out of hospital clothes. The ones
you were wearing before are torn and were covered with blood. Is there anyone
you can ask to bring you clothes?” asked the nurse.
“Don’t worry, I will bring the clothes but you have to give me
half an hour!” said Arnav. The nurse nodded then left.
“Arnav, I can ask Lavanya. Don’t worry!” said Khushi.
“Khushi, right now no-one can know that you are here. Two days
ago, Arjun texted me saying that it has to be kept a secret that you are here
in this hospital. Why do you think we haven’t informed any of your relatives?”
asked Arnav.
“Oh, but then who should I ask?” asked Khushi.
“I own a fashion house remember, I just need to make a few calls,”
said Arnav.
“Oh okay!” said Khushi brightly.
“But I am paying you back for all of this!” she muttered, while
Arnav nodded his head at this woman in front of him.
Very emotional update loved arnv nd khusi
ReplyDeleteReally gud update
ReplyDeletethey care abwt each other soo much x
wow very beautiful update..........
ReplyDeletefrom jenji08
So now khushi will be staying with Arnav ??? :)
ReplyDeletelovely update i knew that guy must be ranjan....
ReplyDeleten did arnav knw khushi before itself????
kushigowda
No he didn't! They were just strangers.
Deletebeautiful update
ReplyDeleteamri123 IF
lovely update
ReplyDeleteamazing yaar.
ReplyDeleteMISTIE,IF
This is a nice update.
ReplyDeleteHowever, I have something that is bothering me.
How and why did Khushi get so close to Arnav, when she lost her beloved husband a few days back who she loved so dearly? She will be very grateful as he saved her life twice. But love and attraction is not something that will change within a few days of her husband's death especially when she was totally in love with her husband even before his death.
Arnav's closeness to her is quite evident and understandable. He met an innocent girl and he doesnt have any relationships so far as the story goes But Khushi's is not.
I mean it was unexpected. I may be wrong here but it seems kind of weird.
Yes you are right.
DeleteBut throughout this, Short story, I have mentioned that Khushi wants to move on in life. When such tragic things happen, and when you are so close to death, you realise how much less you have done in life. It is almost like you are in shock. You want something to hold on to.
When you here, someone spill out their sorrows, you feel that they are exactly like you. There is some closeness because they are two strangers that can sense each other, feel each other's pain. They both know what it feels like. However, I wouldn't call it attraction at the moment. This is not a fairy tale romance, that they will fall in romance. I worked out the full story, so you will understand later on.
I want you to read in between the lines, rather than just what is there. I have pointed it out before that my writings are very mysterious. If in a few chapters I reveal everything, there is no point me writing, because you will get bored. Every chapter is thought about, where it fits in with the story.
I know you may be getting slightly confused but that is the type of reaction I was expecting anyway. Also I am glad you tell me. It means that I am going on the right tracks. I had planned 2 different endings for this story. Now I know which one I will chose.
Look, I know it might feel strange to you. However, I would strongly encourage you to follow the story, and find out what happens. It will end soon, all the plots are nearly finished, so I guess I am at the climax of it right now.
Love,
Mishty
Oh god - I have written an essay! Sorry about it.
DeleteMishty
Hey thanks a lot for the reply. I really appreciate it. And plz it was not an essay. A very very good explanation. It answers all my questions and is logical too.
DeleteThanks again
Your welcome. :)
DeleteLove,
Mishty
loved the update
ReplyDeleteit was really amazing
Oh so beautiful update
ReplyDeleteLoved it
AWWWWWWWWWWW this is just too sweet!
ReplyDeleteThese two talking and getting along, forgetting their pains
Awesome update very emotional
ReplyDeleteBoth care and understand each other
La part was funny hahaha
Continue soon please
Awesome update.....
ReplyDeleteThey r good friends Nw.....
Feeling bad for arnav....
Hope they will take care of eachother....
Thanks for mail...
It seems like the start of a beautiful relationship.
ReplyDeleteyou write beautifully.looking forward to ure updates.
thanks for the mail.
Amazing di
ReplyDeleteThey are on first step
They will eventually fall in love <3
Beautifully described
Awww arnav is opeing his pains to khushi
Thank God khushi started moving on a bit
When u r going to update other FF?
Amazing update. She called him rakshas, lol. Glad to know about arnav. Would love 2 know more about khushi, like her parents and job
ReplyDeleteWOW...LOVLY BONDING BETWEEN TWO HURT SOULS..
ReplyDeletePOOR LAVANYA...GOING TO HAVE TOUGH TIME WITH ASR I GUESS...
I GUESS WE R GETTING GREEDY ASKING U FOR ANOTHER U[PDATE SOON INSPITE OF UR DAILY UPDATES...
BUT I THINK UR STORY N STYLE OF WRITING IS TOO CATCHY...
LOVE IT
awesome update dr
ReplyDeletelove it its very emotional for both khushi and arnav
with in such a short time they hv become very close to each other
emotional update poor asr so much pain he had to go through because of his dad infidelity mom killing her self and his dad following her because of his gulit awesome update well written heartbreaking thanks for the email
ReplyDeleteso emotional
ReplyDeletethey are kindred spirits
they have lost so much in their lives, that they feel a bond
please continue soon
I loved that update <3 knowing arnav isb great and i can see the cloness
ReplyDeletecant wait to read more
barul lover
loved the two updates. please continue.
ReplyDeletenice one
ReplyDeleteloved it
Loved the update!!!
ReplyDeletea touching updt....both bound to each other bcoz of pain....continue sooon.....
ReplyDeleteushankitvc
awww!!!so cute..u r an amazing writer yaar...
ReplyDeleteI like the bonding between Arnav & Khushi & I hope he will be there for her forever.
ReplyDeleteNice one... Felt so good to see the bonding brewing in between these two... It was a cute update... Waiting for the next part
ReplyDeleteLovely update! Nice that she can feel that she has someone.
ReplyDeletedear mishty, hi
ReplyDeletei came across coerced alliance on IF and landed here on this blog, when i started reading all the stories here it felt really good, i want to thank u for writing such lovely stories, and the wilted rose(what shall i say) it is fresh and a straight plot which is a pleasure to read, all the emotions r right there. i take this chance to tell u what i feel about all the stories, CA is really very emotive dealing well with the difficult emotions that a newly wed goes thru, art of sed..well it has just started so will wait before saying anything, broken heart...about misunderstanding and regret and remorse and repentence and an effort to set things right well brought out...well i have not yet read the others...so once i do that will get back to u to share my feelings about them, i hope and wish to read many more of ur writings in the days to come,
once again thanx for such lovely stories.
i hope u don't mind my stalking ur site for updates :-))
TC and bye
Thank you! I am glad that you seem to like my stories. :)
DeleteWell, I don't mind a stalker at all. if you leave your email address, then I can just email you every time I update. Or you can join my facebook group for regular updates:
https://www.facebook.com/groups/mishtyshah/
Love,
Mishty
dear mishty i would luv that u email me but sometimes i lose track of my email :-) so i don't want to trouble u with the mailing hassle but would definitely join ur facebook group for regular updates
Deletebye
dear mishty i have sent in a request for joining facebook group under the name of amudha sarathy
Deletebye tc
very cute part......
ReplyDeletethey r being so close......
update soon......
- Akorshi -
very nice
ReplyDeleteloved it
Read it at one go!
ReplyDeleteThat was very interesting.
Thanks a lot for the blog link!
It was a treat to go through your work.
Read it at one go!
ReplyDeleteThat was very interesting.
Thanks a lot for the blog link!
It was a treat to go through your work.
hi wonderful update! Well written! Khwaishfan (IF)
ReplyDeleteLoved the update
ReplyDelete..Anita..
lovely update
ReplyDeletemissmk if
All the parts were Awesome!
ReplyDeleteLoved Chapter 8! The Bond between the two is growing! <3
Really beautifully written Mishty!
Continue soon!
Love u
Mrina
awesome updt
ReplyDeletesummaiyasayed
awesome update. will you be updating pyar ya iqrar? loved the story.
ReplyDeletepart 8
ReplyDeletenice...........
Arnav is getting close to her........
that was nice and funny when she told him about AR's Boss.........
cont soon dear............
Deepa (spvd)
I just caught up with this story :) brilliantly written... I love it... but can i be a real pain and point something out... Just for your future writing and please I am no professional writer but this is something that was pointed out to me when I started to write. You mix the tenses in the story like it flips from past tense to present tense... Maybe that is something you are working on... But you are a good writer and keep it up :)
ReplyDeleteawesome update love how he opened up to her
ReplyDeleteAwesome update. It's weird how being strangers yet they found comfort in each other. I understand may be Arnav attraction towards Khushi but what about her. It's good that she is moving on but, isn't it too early.
ReplyDeletelove their ego clash regarding costs
ReplyDeletehe tld her abt his past so easily, wow tht speaks volume.
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